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Some suggestions on improving essay writng. Essay 1 : 身在香港. Insufficient knowledge and vocabulary Ref : Accessing Chinese Book 3: Unit 8 香港遊 Task & stimuli : What are the tourist attractions in your place? Where and how can you get there ? What can you do there?
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Essay 1 : 身在香港 • Insufficient knowledge and vocabulary • Ref : Accessing Chinese Book 3: Unit 8 香港遊 • Task & stimuli: • What are the tourist attractions in your place? • Where and how can you get there? • What can you do there? • Which one do you like most? And why?
Essay 2: An essay to introduce yourself Concentrate on 1 topic area only: • Family - family members, relationship, culture, family activities … • Festival - favouritefestivals, significance, cultural activities, food & functions… • Hobbies & interests - What are they? How and why did you get involved? What are the good (or bad) points?...
Essay 3 : My school • Insufficient knowledge : do some research on No. of teachers and students, school facilities etc. • Need extension of the facts: e.g. 設備完善的電腦室, 我們可以上網或做功課 … 我喜歡我的學校因為(我)可以(認識)不同國籍的朋友 …
Essay 4: Introduce myself • The no. of required characters should be 100 – 150 • The essay is more like Q & A . • Can expand the description of family members: e.g. 弟弟今年十歲, 讀小學四年級… 我最喜歡妹妹, 我們常常一起 …