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Getting there • Ronnie wanted to be famous. He had wanted to be famous all of his life. He had to go on a trip to America. It was a scary trip called Spooky Hollow. Ronnie was going by boat. The sea was choppy and horrible when Ronnie set sail. He was scared. It got worse and worse until he hit an island. The island seemed spooky and frightening. Ronnie was in trouble. • Ronnie was an ordinary person and he was sometimes nice and sometimes scary. He was tall with shiny blue eyes and shiny blond hair. He was a business person. Ronnie wanted to get off the island because no-one was nice to him. The only way he could get off the island was to get across the island. He was terrified and frightened to go across the island.
The Spooky Big Eye • Ronnie went through The Spooky Big Eye and Ronnie had to look at it for 5 minutes. It was big and scary and looking at it was terrifying and frightening. If you moved a muscle you would be dead and if you blinked you would collapse and get caught by The Spooky Big Eye. You would sort of still be alive in his throat and you would be there for a year and then it would spit you out. Ronnie went to Spooky Castle.
Troll Bridge • Ronnie went through and met a troll. You have never seen anything like it before. The troll had a wart at the end of his nose and he looked so ugly. He was a nice troll but when you wanted to go over it he turned into a mean troll. He jumped from under the bridge and said, • “Why did you just think that you can walk over? You have to run over my bridge in 5 seconds!” When Ronnie looked at the trolls wart it made him feel sick. Ronnie ran over the bridge and he took 10 seconds. He tried again. Ronnie ran over the bridge and he took 5 and a half seconds he was so pleased. Ronnie went to Sharky Lake.
Sharky Lake • He saw a shark and he was terrified. He was all shaky and he was frightened to go on the boat but Ronnie had to go. He saw a boat that had lots of holes in but Ronnie thought that he couldn’t see any other boats so he didn’t have any other choice. He thought again the sharks are going to try to get through the holes. He got on the boat and he was rowing in and out of the sharks. He got to the end and then Ronnie went to Cobra Lake.
Spooky Castle • Ronnie went to Spooky Castle and there were skulls there and if Ronnie touched one of the skulls he would be dead. Ronnie went from Spooky Castle to Spooky House he saw a bogey monster and when he stepped in Spooky House there was all this slime all over the floor. The bogey monster was revolting. He had one eye in the middle of his head and his head was dark green. • Ronnie had to step on all the slime to get out to Sharky Lake.
Jail Mountain • Ronnie went into jail mountain and there was a dead person that turned into a ghost. There was a dead person lying around and all were skeletons of dead people. • After that they heard some screaming and the ghost was attacking Ronnie and he ran out and into the dark forest.
Dark Forest • There was a fox standing at the tree. The fox’s hair was brown and his eyes were green. And he had fire coming out of his mouth Ronnie went up to the fox and he said, • “Where am I?” The fox said, • “You are in the dark forest. I am going to chase after you and if you don’t go quickly I will eat you.” The fox looked scary. Ronnie wanted to go home. Ronnie ran out of there.
Cobra Lake • When Ronnie got to Cobra Lake he had to swim across it as he couldn’t do anything else. The cobras were chasing after him. Ronnie was terrified. He wanted to get home. The dad cobra was massive and the mummy cobra was big but not as big as the dad. The brother was medium size and so was the sister. • Ronnie ran to the Troll Bridge being sick. The Dad cobra was at the front and then it was the mum cobra. The brother cobra and the sister cobra. Ronnie had to swim 10 miles in the lake and he couldn’t stop otherwise the cobras would have eaten Ronnie. Ronnie needed a drink but he couldn’t he had to swim another 5 miles. Ronnie was nearly there. Ronnie had to stop then the dad cobra bit Ronnie. It made Ronnie ill. • Ronnie could not see any of the island in front of him he was still being sick as he was walking. All of the skulls and the monster from Spooky house and the fox from dark forest were chasing Ronnie and he was trying his best to run as fast as he could because he was still being sick as the cobras had made him worse.
Getting Home • Ronnie had dropped his phone somewhere on the island so he couldn’t ring anyone he had to get home by himself. Ronnie found a boat and went home on it. Half way through the trip, Ronnie had to walk. Ronnie got home at midnight. He went to sleep on the sofa. As it took him a month to get home and it was 20 miles Ronnie slept all the way through until 10 o’clock at night when Ronnie’s family got up and saw Ronnie on the sofa, they all hugged Ronnie. Ronnie’s sister said, • “Cor what is that smell?” and everyone laughed. When they all laughed, Ronnie woke up!
