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A System for Writing Complex Sentences 8/28/13

Writing Workshop: Masterpiece Sentences. A System for Writing Complex Sentences 8/28/13. What is the difference between this. and this ?. Or This ?. Details !. AND. Elaboration !. What is the difference between this,. The cat slept in the basket. And this ?.

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A System for Writing Complex Sentences 8/28/13

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  1. Writing Workshop: Masterpiece Sentences A System for Writing Complex Sentences 8/28/13

  2. What is the difference between this

  3. and this ?

  4. Or This ?

  5. Details ! AND Elaboration !

  6. What is the difference between this, The cat slept in the basket.

  7. And this ? After a huge dinner of fish and milk, the cat slept soundly in a large wicker basket, filled with soft pillows.

  8. Details ! AND Elaboration !

  9. By adding detail and elaborating you can turn a simplesentence into a Masterpiece

  10. Step One “Identify your simple subject and simple predicate.” The birds flew in the sky.

  11. Step Two “Paint your Predicate” This means to tell more about what happened. When? How? Where?

  12. How? (with wings outstretched, swiftly) When? (at sunset) Where? (over the waves) The birds flew with wings outstretched at sunset over the waves.

  13. Step Three “Move the Predicate to create a flow” The birds flew with wings outstretched at sunset over the waves. Example: At sunset, the birds flew over the waves, with wings outstretched.

  14. Step Four “Paint your Subject” Tell more about your subject! What kind of? giant, white, singing How many?Some, thousands, many, several At sunset, with wings outstretched, a thousand birds flew over the waves.

  15. Step Five “Paint your Words” Replace ordinary words with descriptive words. Birds= sea gulls, eagles Flew= soared, floated Waves= thundering tide, crashing surf Over= above, on top of At sunset, with wings outstretched, a thousand sea gulls soared above the thundering tide.

  16. Step Six “Finishing Touches” Move sentence parts around to find the best fit. Refine your wording one last time. The final sentence should be pleasing to your ear! At sunset, a thousand sea gulls burst through the clouds, with wings outstretched, and soared above the thundering tide.

  17. Masterpiece Sentences Made Easy Create complex sentences by asking how, when, where, which, what kind, and how many. Use the answers to elaborate and add detail to each sentence. Refine your sentence by using descriptive words. Move parts of the sentence around until it sounds right.

  18. Independent Practice: • Using the simple sentences you created in your “Do Now,” turn them into complex sentences by adding how? when? and where? to your predicate • For an extra challenge, on your last two sentences add detail to your subject by adding what kind, how many, or which?

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