Class Review
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Class Review 2015.11.11 14010230 SojinKim
Contents 01 Outside Source 02 Fragment 03 Reference
01 Outside Source Source Reliable and credible Relevant and informative/interesting Explain Why you think that. Prove your argument. Academic Writing Key 1. Clear 2. Specific 3. Detailed 4. Concise Informative Interesting + Paragraph is a group of sentence about one topic.
01 Outside Source Opinion Paragraph Opinion I believe cigarettes should be illegal. You need to explain why. 1 -Pollution : 4.5 trillion cigarette butts are thrown on the ground in the world every year. -Medical cost of smoking related illness in Korea per year: 2 trillion won -40,000 people per year in Korea who die because of smoking related illness. Detailed, specific, clear and concise 1 김수정, 권순만. 흡연의 사회적 비용 분석: 2006년을 기준으로. 정책분석평가학회보. 18(4):119~140.
01 Outside Source The reader has zero knowledge! I believe a Sejong University is great. Africa man doesn’t know Sejong University. He has zero knowledge about Sejong University. You should explain in detail!
02 Fragment Fragment =part of sentence , Independent Clause Independent Clause Dependent Clause Dependent Clause Not sentence Complex sentence Before I came to school , I walked Uju. as soon as I woke up. I made a cup of coffee Sentence Time Subordinator S V Complete thought After When During While , D.C. I.C. I.C. D.C.
02 Fragment , Independent Clause Independent Clause Dependent Clause Dependent Clause Because I want an A+ , I study every night. Condition Subordinator You need to take the GRE if you want to go to graduate school.
02 Fragment Ron, who also takes night classes The book that was on the table Pedestrians who cross the street Adjective Clause 1. Finish the independent clause Ron, who also takes night classes , is very busy. The book that was on the table belongs to the teacher. Pedestrians who cross the street should look in both directions before stepping off the curb. 2. Delete who, which, or that to make a simple sentence independent clause Ron takes night classes. The book was on the table. Pedestrians cross the street.
03 Reference Hogue, A. (2008). First steps in academic writing level 2 (2.nd ed.). White Plains, N.Y.: Longman. Noun Project. (n.d.). Retrieved November 12, 2015, from https://thenounproject.com/ NAVER Korean English dictionary. (n.d.). Retrieved November 12, 2015, from http://endic.naver.com http://ruliweb.daum.net/news/view/MD20140914174605030.daum 김수정, 권순만. 흡연의 사회적 비용 분석: 2006년을 기준으로. 정책분석평가학회보. 18(4):119~140.