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802.11 TGmb Editor Report - May 2010

802.11 TGmb Editor Report - May 2010. Authors:. Date: 2010-05-12. Abstract. This document summarises editorial activities on the TGmb Draft since the last meeting Status of Draft Status of comments E-Motions

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802.11 TGmb Editor Report - May 2010

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  1. 802.11 TGmb Editor Report - May 2010 Authors: Date: 2010-05-12 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  2. Abstract • This document summarises editorial activities on the TGmb Draft since the last meeting • Status of Draft • Status of comments • E-Motions • This document is cumulative – i.e., it will be revised per meeting to show updated status. Historic data is shown at the end of the file. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  3. May 2010 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  4. REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) • D1.0, 2009-05 – balloted as LB149 • D2.0, 2009-12 – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. • D2.01, 2010-01 – roll-up of 802.11n • D2.02, 2010-01 – speculative editing of LB160 editorial comments • D2.03, 2010-02 – Comment resolutions from Jan 2010 • D2.04 – Defect resolution from D2.01-D2.03 + speculative editing of MIB changes in 11-10/0216r2 • D3.0 – balloted as LB162 • D3.01 – speculative editing of LB162 editorials Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  5. Balloting Status Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  6. LB162 Comments Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  7. LB162 Status (as of 2010-05-12) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  8. Process for D3.01 • D3.01 speculative editing of 19 editorial comments from LB162 • One of these comments (CID 3084) was subsequently transferred to GEN as it actually resolves some technical ambiguities in D3.0. However these speculative edits are present in D3.01, tagged with this CID. • One of the 20 editorial comments (CID 3124) was not resolved, and was transferred to MAC. Having made this transfer, I have prepared a resolution to this comment in one of my submissions. • D3.01 is currently pending review by Bill, Peter and Mark. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  9. LB162 Documents • REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) • Draft P802.11REVmb_D3.0.pdf • Draft P802.11REVmb_D3.0 Redline.pdf • Composite comments (all ad-hocs) • 11-09-0706-11-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls • Comments assigned to / held by editor • For: resolution, editing or other action • 11-09-0956-06-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls • Editorials (18) – from LB162 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  10. Historic Page Statistics of REVmb Note, drafts balloted (i.e. Dn.0) have editorial comments hidden. As of D2.0, this implies ~18 pages of hidden comment text. Resulting unreliable deltas are highlighted yellow. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  11. E-Motions Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  12. Motion - LB162 Editorials • Approve comment resolutions in 11-09/0956r6 on the “Editorials” tab • Stephens/ Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  13. “Go to ballot” Motion • Having approved comment resolutions for all of the comments received from the first working group ballot on P802.11REVmb D3.0, • Instruct the editor to prepare Draft 4.0 incorporating these resolutions and, • Approve a 15 day Working Group Recirculation Ballot asking the question “Should P802.11REVmb D4.0 be forwarded to Sponsor Ballot?” Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  14. March 2010 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  15. REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) • D1.0, 2009-05 – balloted as LB149 • D2.0, 2009-12 – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. • D2.01, 2010-01 – roll-up of 802.11n • D2.02, 2010-01 – speculative editing of LB160 editorial comments • D2.03, 2010-02 – Comment resolutions from Jan 2010 • D2.04, pending – Defect resolution from D2.01-D2.03 + speculative editing of MIB changes in 11-10/0216r2 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  16. Process for D2.04 • D2.01 contains the roll-up of .11n • D2.02 contains editing of ~50 editorial comments from LB160 • D2.03 contains editing of 126 technical comments approved in Jan 2010 • D2.01-D2.03 were reviewed • 171 defects were reports (mostly from D2.01) • Thank you to my reviewers: Stephen McCann, Jon Rosdahl, Kaberi Banerjee, Sudheer Grandhi, Mark Hamilton, Amit Bansal, Yuichi Morioka, Eldad Perahia, George Vlantis, John Ketchum, Gary Anwyl, Michael Montemurro, Matthew Gast. • D2.04 is pending review by Peter Ecclesine Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  17. LB160 Documents • REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) • Draft P802.11REVmb_D2.03.pdf • + Redlines between D2, D2.01, D2.02 • Composite comments (all ad-hocs) • 11-09-0706-09-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls • Comments assigned to / held by editor • For: resolution, editing or other action • 11-09-0956-04-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls • Recycled comments for review (11) • MIB (2) • LB160 Editorials (50) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  18. Recycled comments for review • 6 implemented as specified • CIDs 2220, 2181, 2006, 2007, 2023, 2010 • 2220: conflict with .11n • 2181: response incomplete • 2006 & 2007: dot11PHYdot11TempType • 2023: MIB description conflict • 2010: missing deprecation reason • 3 implemented in modified form • CIDs 2030, 2076, 2075 • 2030: conflict with .11n • 2076 & 2075: response non-responsive and ambiguous • 2 not implemented at all • CIDs 2011, 2061 regarding dot11TempType Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  19. WG Ballot 160 Comments Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  20. Status by ad-hoc – 2010-03-05 (summary) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  21. Historic Page Statistics of REVmb Note, drafts balloted (i.e. Dn.0) have editorial comments hidden. As of D2.0, this implies ~18 pages of hidden comment text. Resulting unreliable deltas are highlighted yellow. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  22. E-Motions Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  23. Motion - LB160 Editorials • Approve comment resolutions in 11-09/0956r4 on the “LB160 Editorials” tab • Stephens/ Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  24. Motion – MIB • Approve resolutions for comments 2214 and 2039 as shown in 11-10/0216r2 • Notes: • CID 2039 was previously resolved (Jan 2010). This submission proposes an alternative resolution. • Draft D2.04 was speculatively edited on the assumption that this motion passes. • Stephens/ Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  25. “Go to ballot” Motion • Having approved comment resolutions for all of the comments received from the first working group ballot on P802.11REVmb D2.0, • Instruct the editor to prepare Draft 3.0 incorporating these resolutions and, • Approve a 15 day Working Group Recirculation Ballot asking the question “Should P802.11REVmb D3.0 be forwarded to Sponsor Ballot?” Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  26. Historic Data • Slides from previous revisions of this document for • Jan 2010 • Nov 2009 • Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  27. January 2010 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  28. REVmb Draft Numbering History (>D1) • D1.0, 2009-05 – balloted as LB149 • D1.01, 2009-07 – speculative resolution of editorials • D1.02, 2009-08 – speculative resolution of minor technical comments • D1.03, 2009-08 – editing of approved resolutions • D1.04, 2009-10 – editing of approved resolutions • D1.05, 2009-11 – roll-up of 802.11w • D1.06, 2009-11 – defect resolution • D2.0, 2009-12 – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. • D2.01, 2010-01 – roll-up of 802.11n Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  29. Process for D2.0 • D2.0 contains the editing of the 264 comments approved in Nov 2009. • We needed to get the edits out as quickly as possible to give maximum time to the ballot itself over the holiday period. So we used an abbreviated review process. • Bill Marshall and Adrian Stephens shared the editing and cross-checked each others’ work • Matthew Gast also reviewed the edits. • Thankyou to Bill and Matthew Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  30. LB160 Documents • REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) • Draft P802.11REVmb_D2.0.pdf • Draft P802.11REVmb_D2.0 Redline.pdf • Composite comments (all ad-hocs) • 11-09-0706-07-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls • Comments assigned to / held by editor • For: resolution, editing or other action • TBD: 11-09-0956-xx-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls • not yet updated to LB160 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  31. Draft 2.01 • Draft 2.01 includes STD IEEE 802.11n-2009 • It has not been reviewed • An editorial review is planned starting after the 802.11 session • Any defects will be addressed in D2.02 or D2.03 • Call for volunteers: if you’ve not already volunteered to help review D2.01 edits, and you want to join the party, contact Adrian by email asap. • So far about 11 volunteers Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  32. WG Ballot 160 Comments Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  33. Status by ad-hoc – 2010-01-13 (summary) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  34. Historic Page Statistics of REVmb Note, drafts balloted (i.e. Dn.0) have editorial comments hidden. As of D2.0, this implies ~18 pages of hidden comment text. Resulting unreliable deltas are highlighted yellow. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  35. November 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  36. REVmb Draft Numbering History (>D1) • D1.0, 2009-05 – balloted as LB149 • D1.01, 2009-07 – speculative resolution of editorials • D1.02, 2009-08 – speculative resolution of minor technical comments • D1.03, 2009-08 – editing of approved resolutions • D1.04, 2009-10 – editing of approved resolutions • D1.05, 2009-11 – roll-up of 802.11w • D1.06, 2009-11 – defect resolution Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  37. Process for D1.04-D1.06 • D1.04 contains speculative editing of ~200 non-editorial comment resolutions approved in Sept 2009 • D1.04 was reviewed and 62 defects were reported • D1.05 was prepared containing a roll-up of STD 802.11w-2009 • D1.05 was reviewed and 19 defects were reported • D1.06 was prepared containing bugfixes for the D1.04 and D1.05 defects. • Thankyou to the reviewers: • Michael Montemurro, Peter Ecclesine, Matthew Gast, Kaberi Banerjee • Jouni Malinen, Jesse Walker, Matthew Gast, Kapil Sood • Thankyou to Bill Marshall for D1.05 editing Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  38. LB149 Documents • REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) • Draft P802.11REVmb_D1.06.pdf • + Incremental redlines D1.04->D1.05 etc • Composite comments (all ad-hocs) • 11-09-0706-05-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls • Comments assigned to / held by editor • For: resolution, editing or other action • 11-09-0956-03-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  39. Status by ad-hoc – 2009-11-03 (summary) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  40. Sept 2009 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  41. Process for D1.01-D1.03 • D1.01 contains speculative editing of editorial comment resolutions (~770 pages modified) • D1.01 was reviewed (~100 defects reported) • D1.02 contains speculative editing of minor technical comment resolutions, and resolution of the D1.01 defects (~410 pages modifed) • D1.02 was reviewed (~20 defects reported) • D1.03 contains editing of comment resolutions approved in July 2009, plus resolution of the D1.02 defects (~12 pages modified) • D1.03 was reviewed and no defects were reported • Thankyou to the reviewers: Bill, Eldad, Gary, Jon, Kaberi, Mark, Matthew, Michael, Peter, Stephen and Sudheer Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  42. LB149 Documents • REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) • Draft P802.11REVmb_D1.03.pdf + D1.02, D1.01, D1.0 • + Incremental redlines D1.02->D1.03 etc • Composite comments (all ad-hocs) • 11-09-0706-02-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls • Comments assigned to / held by editor • For: resolution, editing or other action • 11-09-0956-00-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  43. WG Ballot 149 Comments Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

  44. Status by ad-hoc – 2009-09-01 (summary) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

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