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Rádai Péter Euro Nyelvvizsga Központ peter.radai@euroexam

Angol B2 / C1. „Írni jó!” Íráskészség fejlesztő foglalkozás vizsgákra készülőknek. Rádai Péter Euro Nyelvvizsga Központ peter.radai@euroexam.org. Az ügyintéző levél szerkezete. 1. rész: Az ügyintézés indítása szándék rövid, egyértelmű közlése 2. rész: Az ügy indoklása

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Rádai Péter Euro Nyelvvizsga Központ peter.radai@euroexam

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  1. Angol B2 / C1 „Írni jó!” Íráskészség fejlesztő foglalkozás vizsgákra készülőknek Rádai Péter Euro Nyelvvizsga Központ peter.radai@euroexam.org

  2. Az ügyintéző levél szerkezete 1. rész: Az ügyintézés indítása szándék rövid, egyértelmű közlése 2. rész: Az ügy indoklása indoklás, magyarázatok, részletezés 3. rész: Az ügyintézés lezárása köszönet, remény kifejezése, ígéret, javaslat, megoldás, kérés, követelés, elvárás, stb.

  3. Bocsánatkérő levél (minta) Dear Peter, I am writing in order to tell you that I cannot come to your lesson tomorrow. You can be sure, I am very sorry to miss the class. The reason for my absence is that our family anaconda has a sore throat, and has not eaten anything for 3 days. The vet can only see him tomorrow, and since my parents are abroad, I am the only one to take him there. I hope you understand the situation. As for preparation for the next lesson, I plan to complete the homework tasks, plus 22 extra exercises. Best wishes,

  4. Email típusok • Az elérni kívánt cél, szándék szerint • complaint • advicegiving • application • motivation • inquiry (askingforinformation) • apology • recommendation / reference • informationgiving • suggestion • introduction (introducingoneself) • appreciation (thankingsomenoneforsomething) • taskgiving (inschools, atwork)

  5. Email típusok Klikk a képre! Dear Peter, I am writing to introduce myself and to sendyou my feedback on the samplematerials that I have havelookedat and editedto so far.[1.] I would like to start by saying that I am very much looking forward to working with you and your colleagues, as I think that it will be a very interesting and stimulating experience for me.  I also hope that my input will… [2.] As you may know, I have spent many years teaching and training, both with International House and theBritish Council, and I have also done some proofreading/editing work with the Council of Europe... 2 letters of appreciation Good Afternoon Costes, My wife and I had the pleasure of dining at Costes on Saturday night. It was truly a night that we will never forget, your whole staff are to be congratulated on a perfect evening from start to finish... [1.] The stars of the night were the dishes. You have a great kitchen team that delivered your menu to perfection... This was our first experience at a Michelin-star restaurant, and will not be our last. Thank you, Chef, for your pursuit of culinary perfection.[2.] I have, and will recommend Costes to my colleges, friends and anyone in Vienna looking for a truly great night out with exceptional food and service...[3.] A letter of introduction

  6. Hatékony, célirányos emailek 1. indítás > 2. részletezés > 3. zárás ‘I haveread your advertisement in which you were looking for a course venue, and I wish toapply and recommend our school building to you…’ ‘Tostrengthenourapplication, I intend to list a number of features of our school which show that this building is the right choice in every way for your purpose…’ ‘My schoolmatesand I believe that we have provided enough evidence above to support our application to host your course…’

  7. Email vázlatok Email / Letter of Inquiry I am writing to you in order to receive further information on the intensive courses you advertised on Language Radio last week… Since I want to take part in the most useful course possible in your catalogue, I will need the following information about your language programmes… I will be grateful if I receive the requested info-pack in time to be able to make an informed decision about which course to attend… Letter of Application / Motivation I would like to apply for the post of teacher-assistant for your summer courses which will be held in the Scottish Highlands… One reason why I consider myself suitable as a tutor is the experience I have gathered for the past 5 years working with autistic children… I hope the qualities and the suitability described above make me a strong candidate for the position…

  8. Email vázlatok Email / Letter of Complaint I wish to make a complaint about the course I attended in mid-summer which your company had advertised and organised… I regret to state that the quality of the course, and what you had promised in the original advertisement, were miles apart, unfortunately… With reference to the problem points listed above, I demand a refund of 50 per cent of the full course fee…

  9. Ingyenes online tanfolyam – Íráskészség- fejlesztő feladatok Klikk a képre!

  10. Az időráfordítás igazságtalansága 

  11. Miről szól? ’A newspaper is better than a magazine. A seashore is a better place than a street. At first, it is better to run than to stand or walk. You may have to try it several times. It takes some skill but it’s easy to learn. Even young children can enjoy it. Once successful, you will discover that complications are minimal. Birds rarely get too close. Rain, however, soaks in very fast. Too many people doing the same thing can also cause problems. One needs lots of room. If there are no complications, it can be very peaceful. A rock will serve an anchor. If things break loose from it, you will not get a second chance.’

  12. Szövegalkotási alapelvek • Cím • Kulcsszavak • A szövegtípusnak megfelelő szándék kifejezése • Logikus szerkezet • Bekezdések • Figyelemfelkeltő indítás és zárás • Megfelelő utalások (it, them, this, these stb.) • Kötőszavak, utalószavak, kifejezések • Változatos, választékos mondatszerkezetek, szókincs

  13. Értékelési szempontok (B2/C1)

  14. Mitől hatékony egy esszé?             

  15. Hatékony ez az esszé? Is itpossibletolivewithout cash? Youcouldhardlyask a more absurdquestiontoday, yetthisdoesn’t stop somepeoplefromtryingtoachieveit. Iftheidea’sworkedforsome, wecouldalso be successful, althoughitcertainlywouldn’t be easy. One major obstacletoovercomewould be our habit of payingforthings, which is a basic part of oureverydaylives. No matterhowdifficultthiscould be, determination and timecouldmakeitpossible. The nexthugestepwould be tohaveyournew ‘non-cash’ habitsacceptedbypeoplearoundyou and the local community. Naturally, thisprocesswouldrequire a willingnesstocompromise and cooperatefromallparties. Admittedly, thelogistics of doing, growing, making, building and exchangingthingswould be time-consuming. However, allthis is eco-friendlywhileinvolvingexercise and outdooractivities. Inshort, livingwithout cash needsquite a healthylifestyle. Allinall, althoughit’stooearlyformetoembarkonthisjourneynow, thebenefitsarestrongenoughtomakepeopleconsidergivingit a tryoneday. Indeed, thatdaymay be closerthanyou, or I, mightthink.

  16. Melyik szövegtípus? A szöveg stílusa formális, távolságtartó. A szöveg logikusan szerkesztett, egymáshoz kapcsolódó bekezdésekből áll. A szerző megkísérli bevonni a közönséget az érvelésbe. A szerző a cikk tárgyára, témájára vonatkozó minden fontos adatot, információt megad és ezekről személyes véleményét is közli. Szinte minden bekezdés rendelkezik tételmondattal (topicsentence). Az informális stílus bizonyos jegyei (pl. Howabout…, wouldn’t, I’m) megengedettek. A szerző egyértelműen jelzi, hogy mit vár az olvasótól. Klikk a képre!

  17. Tippek és online segédanyagok } szerző szándéka+ olvasó reakcióinak felmérése interakció hatékonysága szövegtípusok (pl. műkritika, újságcikk): tippek és autentikus minták szövegkohéziós eszközök: kötőszavak, utaló szavak, kifejezések Euroexam oldal: íráskészség-fejlesztő tippek, anyagok, „szolgáltatások” Klikk a hiperlinkekre!

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