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Higher Writing

Higher Writing. Question 1. Rubric is always in English Read the question carefully Make sure you know what you are supposed to do You must fulfill all of the bullet points If you leave one or more out you will lose marks. Answers are marked twice once for Communication and

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Higher Writing

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  1. Higher Writing

  2. Question 1 • Rubric is always in English • Read the question carefully • Make sure you know what you are supposed to do • You must fulfill all of the bullet points • If you leave one or more out you will lose marks. • Answers are marked twice • once for Communication and • then again for Accuracy

  3. Question 1 • “You are on a day trip. Write an account of your trip (90-100 words)” • Not a letter • Story / Essay / Account / Composition • Day Trip – not a holiday in Spain • Perhaps a school trip • Football match? Clones 2007?

  4. Question 1 • Read all bullet points • Describe • Where you are • Who is with you • What your journey was like • Two things you have done so far • What you like about the place • What time you will be going home • 10 marks for Communication. • Try and allocate the marks

  5. Question 1 • Suggestion Mark Allocation • Describe • Where you are (1) • Who is with you (1) • What your journey was like (2) • Two things you have done so far (4) • What you like about the place (1) • What time you will be going home (1)

  6. Where you are • Don’t forget: The rubric says you are on a day trip – so use the Present Tense. • Tá mé ar turas go Baile Átha Cliath • Seo mé ar turas scoile go Béal Feirste • Tá mise agus mo rang ar lá amuigh ón scoil go Zú Bhaile Átha Cliath • Tá an rang ar fadar shiúl go hAmharclann Bhéal Feirste.

  7. Who is with you • Tá an rang ar fad liom • Tá mise agus mo chara, Pól ann • Tá mé le mo thuismitheoirí • Tá mise agus mo theaghlach ar shiúl. • Tá mé ar an turas le mo cholceathrar.

  8. What your journey was like • Read the rubric – was like = past tense • Bhí an turas go holc • Bhí an turas iontach fada • Bhí an turas maith go leor ach rófhada • Mhair an turas trí uair an chloig • Ní raibh rud ar bith le feiceáil ar an turas • Bhí mé tinn ar an turas – ní taisteálaí maith mé!

  9. Two things you have done so far • Rubric – have done = past tense • Chonaic mé/muid cuid mhór rudaí • dráma ar an ardán • cluiche peile iontach suimiúil • taispeántas ealaíne • dúlra áitiúil • D’imir mé peil le mo chairde ar an trá/ar an pháirc

  10. Two things you have done • D’ith mé lón sa bhialann – bhí sé iontach blasta • Cheannaigh mé bronntanais do mo thuismitheoirí sa siopa – bhí gach rud iontach daor! • Chaill mé mo mhála ar an bhus • Chaill mé mo chuid airgid uilig ar an bhus! • Bhí mé ag caoineadh

  11. What you like about the place • Not asked for a reason – but always give one • Is maith liom an … • an radharcra • na daoine • na háiseanna • na rudaí sa siopa • mar… • tá suim agam sa dúlra • bhí siad iontach cairdiúil • bhí cuid mhór le déanamh • bhí rogha leathan ann.

  12. What time you will be going home • Read rubric – will be = future tense • Beidh mé ag dul abhaile ar a dó a chlog • Rachaidh muid abhaile ar a trí a chlog • Fillfidh muid ar a ceathair a chlog • mar… • beidh na busanna ag imeacht ón scoil ar a trí a chlog • beidh mé ag obair anocht • tá cluiche peile agam anocht.

  13. Obair Baile • Write a response to this question using these notes as guidelines • 90 – 100 words • This slideshow will be available for download from the school website (www.stpaulsbessbrook.org) • To be completed on file paper (skip lines) for class on Wednesday. • Anyone who doesn’t do the work will be on detention on Thursday.

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