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9 月独立写作机经 隐藏 绝对词类

9 月独立写作机经 隐藏 绝对词类. 小马过河 孙思达 Sunsida@xiaoma.com. 独立写作. 议论文：目的性强 —— 说服他人 议论文三要素： standpoint( 论点 ) reasoning( 论证 ) examples and details( 论据 ). 独立写作文章结构. 开头段： 话题背景＋引题＋自己观点 主体段： 展开论证 （ 1 ）一边倒 （ 2 ）让步转折 （欲扬先抑） 结尾段： 总结文章要点＋重申观点. 文章结构与备考. 开头段与结尾段：

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9 月独立写作机经 隐藏 绝对词类

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  1. 9月独立写作机经隐藏绝对词类 小马过河孙思达 Sunsida@xiaoma.com

  2. 独立写作 议论文：目的性强——说服他人 议论文三要素：standpoint(论点) reasoning(论证) examples and details(论据)

  3. 独立写作文章结构 开头段：话题背景＋引题＋自己观点 主体段：展开论证 （1）一边倒 （2）让步转折（欲扬先抑） 结尾段：总结文章要点＋重申观点

  4. 文章结构与备考 开头段与结尾段： 练5＋篇机经独立写作题目，总结开头结尾模版。 总结模版的原则：与话题相关的前提下固定不变的内容越多越好。 提前打磨语言表达；节省考场时间

  5. 隐藏绝对词类 People should pay to use public transportation

  6. 隐藏绝对词 (All) people should pay to use (all) public transportation. 1、拆all people: 让步：大多数人应该pay。(对all降级) 转折：有的人不应该pay。(用特殊情况否定all) 老人、小孩、残障人士等不应该pay.

  7. People should pay to use public transportation. 让步段： Admittedly, most people should pay to use public transportation. 拓展： （1）公共交通工具的运行&维修需要成本。 （2）反面论证，所有人都不pay，将造成巨大财政负担&公共交通工具过分拥挤。

  8. Admittedly, most people should pay to use public transportation. It is common knowledge that the construction and maintenance of any public transportation cost a large amount of money. If the government were to provide its citizens with free transportation, chances are high that this government, though well intentioned, will end up running in deficit in the long term. Additionally, there is no way to rule out the possibility that some people with private vehicles would take advantage of this policy, making buses and subways too crowded for those who really need them.

  9. People should pay to use public transportation. 转折段： Nevertheless, for people who are unable to support themselves, such the aged and people with disabilities, public transportation should be free. 拓展： （1）老弱病残不能挣钱，免费交通减轻他们的压力。 （2）政府有义务和责任帮助弱势群体,。 (disadvantaged groups)

  10. Nevertheless, for people who are unable to support themselves, such as the aged and those with disabilities, public transportation should be free. First and foremost, the disadvantaged groups are usually financially challenged. To most people, the amount paid to use the subway might be trivial. For them, however, the money can make a difference. In addition, it’s the obligation of the government to take care of those who have difficulty taking care of themselves, as this is one of the imperative conditions why the government is endowed with just power by its people.

  11. 拆交通工具：按建造＋运行＋维护cost高低分 ［1］让步段： 诚然，昂贵的交通工具需要收费。 （列举、列数字、反面假设） ［2］转折段： 另一些如公交车神马的可以免费。

  12. Admittedly, public transportation should not all be free. People should pay to use public transportation whose construction and maintenance cost a large amount of money, such as train and airplane. If the government were to provide its citizens with such transportation without charging a fee, chances are high that this government, though well intentioned, will end up running in deficit in the long term. Also, if people don’t have to pay to use transportation as efficient as airplane, it’s not hard to imagine how crowded the airport can be. More complex is the issue of regulating who can take the airplane and who can not for there is no way that the supply can be enough to meet the demand.

  13. Nevertheless, exempting people from paying for buses is advisable. The cost of running such transportation system is relatively low. The government will not be heavily burdened. More importantly, such a policy can make a difference in poor people’s lives for two reasons. The first one is that bus is the most frequently used public transportation in our daily life. Another reason, which is perhaps subtler, is that although to most people, the amount saved by not paying for bus might be trivial, it means much more to people who are financially challenged to survive.

  14. 1.Professional athletes do not deserve the high salaries they earn. Those who don’t : addicted to drugs; using analeptic to win a game; not being serious about their career or the faith of their fan.

  15. 1.Professional athletes do not deserve the high salaries they earn. Most do: physical suffering and exhaustion the spirit they, through their own experience, convey when sport is viewed as an industry……

  16. 2. Students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in the university.

  17. 3. Younger school children (aged 5-10)should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history.

  18. 4. Working at home using computers and telephones is better than working in the office.

  19. 5. If you cannot say anything nice about others, you’d better not say anything

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