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Characteristics of Descriptive Essays

Characteristics of Descriptive Essays . from Seeing the Pattern 146-150. Uses Sensory Details. Sight Sound Smell Taste Touch Try to use a variety of senses in your writing. Sentences Come Alive. Active Verbs. Examples. The team captain proudly accepted the award.

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Characteristics of Descriptive Essays

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  1. Characteristics of Descriptive Essays from Seeing the Pattern 146-150

  2. Uses Sensory Details • Sight • Sound • Smell • Taste • Touch Try to use a variety of senses in your writing.

  3. Sentences Come Alive Active Verbs Examples The team captain proudly accepted the award. The team captain marched to the podium, grasped the trophy, and gestured toward his teammates. Use active verbs rather than adverbs to create “striking and lasting impressions” (148). What is the effect of the revision on the reader’s understanding of the event?

  4. Dominant Impression • Overall attitude, mood, or feeling about the subject • Implied thesis of the descriptive essay • This is your point—define it clearly

  5. Connotative Language • Words have subtle variations in meaning • Select words that strengthen your dominant impression.

  6. Uses Comparison Simile Metaphor Eating chili peppers is a descent into a fiery hell. Biting into a tabasco pepper is like aiming a flame-thrower at your parted lips

  7. Uses Comparison Personification The television screen stared back at me.

  8. Methods of Organization Spatial Chronological

  9. Methods of Organization Least to Most Most to Least

  10. Vantage Point • The vantage point is like your perspective in the piece. Think of it as a camera for the reader. • Fixed: Stays in one place. • Moving: Moves from place to place. • Choose a vantage point that feels appropriate to your purpose. • What vantage point(s) will give your reader the most useful information? • From which vantage point(s) can you provide the most revealing or striking details?

  11. p. 151

  12. Journal #2: Dollar Bill Description • Consider the dollar bill in front of you. • What feelings or emotions does the dollar create in you? • Write a description in which you convey these feelings. • Don’t come out and say the feeling—let the description SHOW it. • Go back through your description and label the sensory details you use. Do you use a variety of senses, or do you rely on one? • Looking at this sample, how would you describe your specific voice. What makes this writing sound like you?

  13. Brainstorm • Look at the prompt for the essay. • For each noun in the chart, brainstorm five topics. • You will use this list to help you come up with an idea for your descriptive essay.

  14. “Eating Chili Peppers” pp. 144-146 Read the sample carefully. • What is the dominant impression? • What is the vantage point? • What method of organization does the author use? • What language appears to be particularly effective?

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