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IELTS Task 2 Writing – advantages/disadvantages type essay. Planning…. Which of these ideas could be included in this essay?. The development of weapons through history. Suggestions for achieving world peace. Our increasing reliance on modern technology. The depletion of natural resources.
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Which of these ideas could be included in this essay? • The development of weapons through history. • Suggestions for achieving world peace. • Our increasing reliance on modern technology. • The depletion of natural resources. • The high cost of fuel.
Assessing essays…Sample script A • Good arguments and a clear point of view • But poor structures and answer not very coherent • Supporting arguments/ evidence not linked together and some ideas unfinished • Some good vocabulary but often words missing. • Band score = 5
Assessing essays…Sample script B • Well-written and writer’s point of view is clear • Some good arguments but are repeated • Easy to read and well-organised • Some good use of linkers but confused occasionally • Wide range of structures handled well • A few small problems with vocabulary, including spelling and word choice • Band score = 7