Writing Plan for Information Request

2. Writing Plan for Information Request • Opening: Ask the most important question first or express a polite command. • Body: Explain the request logically and courteously. Ask other questions if necessary. • Closing: Request a specific action with an end date, if appropriate, and show appreciation.

3. Improving Openers for Routine Request Letters Weak: I’ve been given the task of locating a convention site for my company’s meeting. I’ve checked a number of places, and your hotel looks possible. Improved: Will you please answer the following questions regarding possible accommodations at the Hyatt Regency for a conference in May.

4. Improving Openers for Routine Request Letters Weak: While reading WIRED magazine, I noticed an offer of a free video describing your Web-building software. Improved: Please send me your free video describing your Web-building software.

5. Improving Openers for Routine Request Letters Weak: I am conducting a training class for students of photography at the Lincoln Training Center, and I saw a picture that we would like to use in our program. Improved: What is the procedure for ordering a copy of a photograph to be used for training purposes?

6. Improving Closings for Routine Request Letters Weak: Thanks for any information you provide. Improved: We would appreciate receiving answers to these questions before April 4 so that we will have plenty of time to plan our conference.

7. Improving Closings for Routine Request Letters Weak: Hoping to hear from you at your earliest convenience. Improved: Please send the video by August 15.

8. Improving Closings for Routine Request Letters Weak: Thank you for your cooperation. Improved: Your answer to my inquiry will help me make my printer choice. Thanks!

9. LetterheadIsland Graphics 893 Dillingham Boulevard Honolulu, HI 96817-8817 line 12 or 2 lines below letterhead DatelineSeptember 13, 200x 2 to 10 lines Inside Mr. T. M. Wilson Address Visual Concepts Enterprises 1901 Haumualii Highway Lihue, HI 96766 1 blank line Salutation Dear Mr. Wilson: Parts of a Business Letter

10. 1 blank line Subject Line SUBJECT: BLOCK LETTER STYLE 1 blank line Body This letter illustrates block letter style, about which you asked. All typed lines begin at the left margin. The date is usually placed two inches from the top edge of the paper or two lines below the last line of the letterhead, whichever position is lower. If a subject line is included, it appears two lines below the salutation. The word SUBJECT is optional. The complimentary close appears Parts of a Business Letter

11. two lines below the end of the last paragraph. 1 blank line Complimentary Sincerely, Close 3 blank lines Signature Mark H. Wong Block Graphics Designer 1 blank line Reference MHW:pil Initials Parts of a Business Letter

12. Writing Plan for an Order Request • Opening: Authorize purchase of items. Suggest method of shipping. • Body: List items vertically. Provide quantity, order number, description, and unit price. • Closing: Request shipment by a specific date. Tell method of payment. Express appreciation.

13. Writing Plan for Simple Claim • Opening: Describe clearly the desired action. • Body: Explain the nature of the claim. Tell why the claim is justified. Provide details regarding the action requested. • Closing: End pleasantly with a goodwill statement. Include end dating if appropriate.

14. Writing Plan for Grantinga Claim • Subject Line (optional): Identify previous correspondence. • Opening: Grant the request or announce an adjustment immediately. • Body: Provide details about how you are complying with the request. Try to regain the reader’s confidence. Include resale or sales promotion if appropriate. • Closing: End positively with forward-looking thought. Express confidence in future business dealings.

15. Writing Plan for a Letterof Recommendation • Opening: Identify the applicant, the position, and the reason for writing. Establish your relationship with the applicant. • Body: Describe applicant’s job duties; give specific examples of skills and attributes. Compare with others in field. • Closing: Summarize applicant’s significant attributes. Offer an overall rating. Draw a conclusion regarding the recommendation.

16. Three Kinds of Goodwill Messages 1. Letters of appreciation • To customers for their business • To hosts and hostesses for their hospitality • To colleagues for jobs well done • To individuals who have performed favors

17. Three Kinds of Goodwill Messages 2. Letters of congratulation • For engagements, marriages, anniversaries, births • For promotions, appointments • For awards • For any significant event

18. Three Kinds of Goodwill Messages 3. Letters of sympathy • To console a friend, relative, or loved one

19. Goodwill Messages:Cards or Personalized Letters? Typical Greeting Card Thank-You Message It's wonderful to visit with someone as nice as you– You make your guests feel so at home by everything you do. So this just comes to thank you in a warm and special way– For your hospitality was enjoyed much more than words can say!

20. Goodwill Messages:Cards or Personalized Letters? Personalized Thank-You Letter Dear Professor and Mrs. Shelton: Thanks for inviting the other members of our business club and me to your home for dinner last Saturday. The warm reception you and your wife gave us made the evening very special. Your gracious hospitality, the delicious dinner served in a lovely setting, and the lively discussion following dinner all served to create an enjoyable evening that I will long remember.

21. Goodwill Messages:Cards or Personalized Letters? Personalized Thank-You Letter We appreciate the opportunity you provided for us students to become better acquainted with each other and with you. Sincerely,

22. Tips for Writing Goodwill Messages • Be selfless. Discuss the receiver, not the sender. • Be specific. Instead of generic statements (You did a good job), include special details (Your marketing strategy to target key customers proved to be outstanding). The Five Ss

23. Tips for Writing Goodwill Messages • Be sincere. Show your honest feelings with conversational, unpretentious language (We're all very proud of your award). • Be spontaneous. Strive to make the message natural, fresh, and direct. Avoid canned phrases (If I may be of service, please do not hesitate . . . . ). The Five Ss

24. Tips for Writing Goodwill Messages • Keep the message short. Remember that, although they may be as long as needed, most goodwill messages are fairly short. The Five Ss

25. Writing Thank-Yous Cover three points in gift thank-yous. • Identify the gift. • Tell why you appreciate it. • Explain how you will use it.

26. Writing Thank-Yous Be sincere in sending thanks for a favor. • Tell what the favor means to you. • Avoid superlatives and gushiness. • Maintain credibility with sincere, simple statements.

27. Writing Thank-Yous Offer praise in expressing thanks for hospitality. As appropriate, compliment the following: • Fine food • Charming surroundings • Warm hospitality • Excellent host and hostess • Good company

28. Answering Congratulatory Messages Respond to congratulations. • Send a brief note expressing your appreciation. • Tell how good the message made you feel. Accept praise gracefully. • Don't make belittling comments (I'm not really all that good!) to reduce awkwardness or embarrassment.

29. Extending Sympathy Refer to the loss or tragedy directly but sensitively. • In the first sentence mention the loss and your personal reaction. • For deaths, praise the deceased. Describe positive personal characteristics (Howard was a forceful but caring leader).

30. Extending Sympathy • Offer assistance. Suggest your availability, especially if you can do something specific. • End on a reassuring, positive note. Perhaps refer to the strength the receiver finds in friends, family, colleagues, or religion.

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