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The Vicious Run-on Sentence

The Vicious Run-on Sentence. …and how to tame it. Run-on Sentence. Has at least 2 parts Either part can stand alone 2 independent clauses improperly combined The sun is high, put on some sunscreen. How to Combine a Run-on. Comma + coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS)

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The Vicious Run-on Sentence

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  1. The Vicious Run-on Sentence …and how to tame it.

  2. Run-on Sentence • Has at least 2 parts • Either part can stand alone • 2 independent clauses improperly combined • The sun is high, put on some sunscreen.

  3. How to Combine a Run-on • Comma + coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS) • The sun is high, so put on sunscreen. • F • A • N • B • O • Y • S

  4. FANBOYS Practice • Correctly combine 2+ independent clauses using 3 different FANBOYS. • Raise your hand when you’re done. • You have 8 minutes 

  5. Pain-Free Guide to Semi-colons

  6. Ok, so what does a semi-colon do? • Links 2 independent clauses (2 complete thoughts) with no additional words

  7. Examples • I am going home; I intend to stay there. • It rained heavily during the afternoon; we managed to have our picnic anyway. • They couldn't make it to the summit and back before dark; they decided to camp for the night.

  8. What else can it do? • join 2 independent clauses together with a conjunctive adverb (adverbs that join independent clauses): • however • moreover • therefore • consequently • otherwise • nevertheless • thus

  9. More Examples • I am going home; moreover, I intend to stay there. • It rained heavily during the afternoon; however, we managed to have our picnic anyway. • They couldn't make it to the summit and back before dark; therefore, they decided to camp for the night.

  10. Correct or Incorrect? • I felt sleepy after school; I took a nap on the couch. • The prom is next month; but I don’t have a date yet. • I love pizza; wings; chocolate; and burgers. • Washington Irving is a Romantic author; however, Nathaniel Hawthorne is a Dark Romantic. • I failed English; consequently, my parents grounded me.

  11. Semi-Colon Practice • Write 2 sentences correctly combining 2+ independent clauses with a semi-colon and NO additional words. • Write 2 sentences correctly combining 2+ independent clauses using a conjunctive adverb. • You have 11 minutes 

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