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黄牛课件

黄牛课件. 中国首家 新课标免费 资源网（ 不必注册，免费下载 ）. 请记住我们的网址： www.kejian123.com. 韶关二模基础写作. 基础写作. 写作步骤 1 ）审题（体裁，时态） 2 ）组 5 句（关键词，关键句） 3 ）成文. 审题. 文体：记叙文 时态：一般现在时. 组句. 春天是一年中的第一个季节，从 3 月持续到 5 月。 平均气温 20 度，日子变长了。 春天是一个生机勃勃，绿意盎然的季节，万物都复苏了。 在三月，会吹东风，让人感觉不舒服。 但四月的细雨，五月的太阳，让大地都覆盖上绿色，人们欢乐又愉快。.

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黄牛课件

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  1. 黄牛课件 中国首家新课标免费资源网（不必注册，免费下载） 请记住我们的网址：www.kejian123.com

  2. 韶关二模基础写作

  3. 基础写作 • 写作步骤 • 1）审题（体裁，时态） • 2）组5句（关键词，关键句） • 3）成文

  4. 审题 • 文体：记叙文 • 时态：一般现在时

  5. 组句 • 春天是一年中的第一个季节，从3月持续到5月。 • 平均气温20度，日子变长了。 • 春天是一个生机勃勃，绿意盎然的季节，万物都复苏了。 • 在三月，会吹东风，让人感觉不舒服。 • 但四月的细雨，五月的太阳，让大地都覆盖上绿色，人们欢乐又愉快。

  6. 1 春天是一年中的第一个季节，从3月持续到5月。 Spring, the first season of the year, lasts from March to May. Spring, warm and wet, is the first season of the year, which lasts from March to May. 2 平均气温20度，日子变长了。 With an average temperature of 20℃, the days become longer.

  7. 3 春天是一个生机勃勃，绿意盎然的季节，万物都复苏了。 Spring is a season of freshness and greenness and everything comes back to life. 4 在三月，会吹东风，让人感觉不舒服。 In March, the east winds generally blow, which are not comfortable.

  8. 5 但四月的细雨，五月的太阳，让大地都覆盖上绿色，人们欢乐又愉快。 But the drizzle of April and the sunshine of May make the earth covered with greenness, and people are happy and enjoyable.

  9. 成文： Spring, warm and wet, is the first season of the year, which lasts from March to May. With an average temperature of 20℃, the days become longer. Spring is a season of freshness and greenness and everything comes back to life. In March, the east winds generally blow, which are not comfortable. But the drizzle of April and the sunshine of May make the earth covered with greenness, and people are happy and enjoyable.

  10. 存在典型错误 • 1、单词拼写错误较多 季节 reason 月份 mouth mounth 春天 spang spering 三月 match 四月 apil 气温 temperture

  11. 2、搭配错误 • On March…on April…on May • …more and more long

  12. includes • 3、句子错误（特别是第一句） • 1) 缺少谓语 • The spring, which is the first season in a year, including three month. • Spring is the first season of the year, which from March to May. • Spring is the first season of the year which including the March, April and May. includes

  13. 2) 多个谓语 • As spring comes, the daytime becomes longer, everything is full of live and all go alive and everywhere is full of green as well.

  14. 黄牛课件 中国首家新课标免费资源网（不必注册，免费下载） 请记住我们的网址：www.kejian123.com

  15. 3) with / as 使用错误 • With the time get longer and longer… • As the day getting longer and longer… • With the spring come to corner, the day become longer.

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