1. English Final Presentation By: Andrew Sedano

2. Introduction • Goals • Beginning Attitutde • Literacy Memoir • Discourse Community Project • Engineering Lab Report • Over All Growth • Interactive Assignment

3. Goals • Broaden my vocabulary • Improve the flow of my papers • Learn new formats • Able to create well defined papers

4. Who are you as writer? • Who/what has influenced your writing? • What in your writing needs improvement? • Reflect on your past writing experiences Literacy Memoir

5. Anticipations • Steps • Brainstorming • Journal entries • Proposal/Teacher Conference • 30 min. writing session • Peer Workshop • Multiple viewpoints • HOC (Higher Order Concerns) • LOC (Lower Order Concerns) Literacy Memoir Part I • Improvements • Grammatical • Organization • Flow • Content

6. Example of Peer Review

7. Example of Peer Review

8. Anticipations • Confident • Less grammatical mistakes • Steps • Eliminate all HOC • Look over peer review and comments • Accept/Not Accept changes • Ms. Camargo’s Revisions • More specific • Include better details Literacy Memoir Part II

9. Literacy MemoirPart III • Anticipations • Better organized • Flows a lot smother • More detailed • Steps • Eliminate all LOC • Consider Ms. Camargo’s revisions • Add more detailed and be more specific • Proper Format (MLA) • Improvements • Better flowing • Easily understandable • Well organized • No grammar mistakes

10. Overall Improvement Proper steps needed in order to consider something as your final draft. Learn how to peer review Better organizational skills Better flowing paper Well developed details Continue to have problems… Putting ideas to paper Introductions/Conclusions Better vocabulary Literacy Memoir Reflection What Was Learned Type of writer Steps taken when approaching a new paper

11. What type of writing will you take part in in your future career? • Research • Reports • Design Packages • Project Proposals • What writing conventions are preeminent in your Discourse Community? • Chicago Manual Format • Detailed • Labeled Discourse Community Project

12. Engineering Conventions

13. Engineering Conventions

14. Anticipations • Steps • Research • Individual Report • Reflection • Camargo’s Revisions • Proper Format Correcting • Better Detail • Better Word Choice Discourse Community Project

15. DCP Revisions

16. DCP Reflection • Learned • Type of writing styles and conventions • Jargon • ENGR 1201 • Other Discourse Communities • Improvements • Well developed research • Proper Formatting (MLA)

17. Overall Growth • Revisions • Peer Editing • Organization • Better flowing paper • Formatting Skills

18. Journal Write Questions How has your attitude changed regarding peer review since that of your high school years? Why do you think this is? maturity, peer workshop guidelines, etc.

19. THANK YOU QUESTIONS?