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Mr. Said Abid s/o Said Tahir

RESEARCH WRITING SKILLS SHOWCASE. THE 2013 RESEARCH WRITING SKILLS SHOWCASE OF. Mr. Said Abid s/o Said Tahir. mr.saidabid.saidy@gmail.com. Afghan flag image courtesy of ( www.picafghan.com). FIRST SLIDE. LAST SLIDE. END SHOW. PREVIOUS SLIDE. LAST VIEWED. NEXT SLIDE.

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  1. RESEARCH WRITING SKILLS SHOWCASE THE 2013 RESEARCH WRITING SKILLS SHOWCASE OF Mr. Said Abid s/o Said Tahir mr.saidabid.saidy@gmail.com Afghan flag image courtesy of (www.picafghan.com) FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  2. The Use of Maslow’s Theory to Enhance Children Learning in Afghanistan Said Abid, Khan Village, Cape Town, Nangarhar Province 747567 Afghanistan (mr.saidabid.saidy@gmail.com) G10 SHL1013 Professional English (13 December 2013) Background & Urgency of the Problem Proposed Poster Design Timeline & Implementation Strategy •  Afghan Children are suffering from education. • The education system is not that good and standardized • In some areas children do not have access to school, kindergarten, and so on. • Week 1: Design and production of posters • Week 2: Assigning people for the distribution of the posters • Week 3: Poster distribution • Week 4: Implementation 5 ways of Enhancing Children Learning in Afghanistan How to be well educated? Projected Challenges & Solutions • Giving the workshop to the teachers to enhance children learning • Workshop will take 2-3 days, and will cost us some amount of money • After workshop the teachers will know how to interact with the students, and how to teach them in a manner, where they can understand succinctly • The teachers have to encourage the children towards their studies and motivate them each in everyday in the class Statement of the Problem & Proposal In three weeks I will design an informative poster with 7 pictures taken from the internet in Pashto-English about three ways of enhancing children learning (Fabbs, 2011, para.1-2) to enable junior high school teachers (Oxford Brookes University, 2011, para.3) in Afghanistan , so that the teachers can improve their lecture delivery by using textbooks, photo caption, and visual strategies (Miller, 2013, para.6). References Assertions or Assumptions of the Study • Fabbs. (2011, March 24). Enhancing Children’s Learning: Insights from Cognitive, Education, and Neuroscience Research. Retrieved December 10, 2013, from http://www.fabbs.org • Giving, G. (2013, March 12). Train Effective Afghan Teachers. Retrieved December 10, 2013, from http://www.globalgiving.org • Fink, D. L. (2005). Integrated course design. Manhattan, KS: The IDEA Center. Retrieved from http://www.theideacenter.org • Maslow, A. H. (1943). A Theory of Human Motivation. Psychological Review, 50, pp. 370, from http://www.learning-theories.com Teachers will complete a 6-week seminar and learn how to use interactive teaching methods like role-play and group work while teaching the students (Giving, 2013, para.4), and teachers can learn to make lesson plans (Fink, 2005), and integrate new curriculum on peace and health into their classes. Methodology Theoretical Background • Photographs are taken and used on a poster • The poster will be shown in schools, courses, and tuitions areas. • Workshops will be given to the teachers to enhance children learning • Teachers will follow the 5 steps on the poster on enhancing children learning • Teachers should entertain the children before starting the lesson and give them a 5 minutes break in each hour The highest level is self-actualization, or the self-fulfillment. Behavior in this case is not driven or motivated by deficiencies but rather one’s desire for personal growth and the need to become all the things that a person is capable of becoming (Maslow, 1970). Statement of the Thesis Theoretical Application Thesis statement: All teachers, principles and staff who do not know to enhance children learning (Fabbs, 2011, para.1-2) in Afghanistan can follow seven pictures on a poster to use interactive teaching methods such as role-play, group work, and making lesson plans before or in-between teaching (Giving, 2013, para.4). As a human being everybody needs good food, shelter, warmth, education , healthcare, and so forth. In Afghanistan children are not treated well, are not well educated, and the education is not that standard, thus we need to enhance children learning and improve the level of education. About the Writer • Said Abid s/o Said Tahir is a Banking and Finance Scholar of Albukhary International University. He is currently seeking the ways to Enhance Children Learning in Afghanistan Afghanistan flag courtesy of (www.mapsofworld.com) AIU logo courtesy of (www.aiu.com)

  3. SUMMARY ASSESSMENT: PROJECT PROPOSAL Statement of the Research Problem (1,2,3) Electronic Research (1,2,3) Assumptions of the Proposal (1,2,3) Reference Listing (1,2,3) Statement of the Thesis (1,2,3) Letter of Transmittal (1) Theoretical Background & Application (1) Summary / Abstract Writing (1) Methods & Procedures (1) Projected Problems and Solutions (1) 00% 00% 00% 00% 00% 00% 00% 00% 00% 00% 00% FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  4. 1 1.0 RUBRIC 1.1 DETAILS 1.2 THEORY 1.3 URGENCY 1.4 REFERENCES 1.5 ASSUMPTION 1.6 THESIS FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  5. assessment rubric: statement of the research problem 00% A* = 90 to 100 A = 80 to 90 B = 70 to 80 C = 60 to 70 D = 50 to 60 F = 0 to 49 [In drafting: PASS or FAIL grade only]

  6. 1.1.1 DETAILS KEYWORDS MATCH Match FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  7. 1.1.2 DETAILS WEBSITE TITLE AUTHOR&Date DATE PARA.1 FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  8. 1.2.1 THEORY KEYWORD THEORY’S NAME&MATCH FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  9. WEBSITE 1.2.2 THEORY TITLE AUTHOR DATE PARA.5 FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  10. 1.3.1 URGENCY KEYWORDS MATCH FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  11. 1.3.2 URGENCY WEBSITE TITLE PARA.1 AUTHOR&DATE FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  12. 1.4 REFERENCES References 00% Energy, U. D. (2013, 12 10). Biogas. Retrieved from http://www.wbdg.org McLeod, S. (2013, 12 10). Maslow's Hierarchy of Needs. Retrieved from http://www.simplypsychology.org/ Stanojevic, O. (2011, 4 27). Afghan Biogas Construction Manual FINAL. Retrieved 12 10, 2013, from http://www.scribd.com FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  13. 1.5 ASSUMPTION From problem statement to assumption Problem statement Assumption In three weeks, I will design an informative poster with 5 colorful photos taken from the Internet in Pashto, and English about building the biogas system (Energy, 2013) in Afghanistan, so that the Afghan people can make their own gas(Stanojevic, 2011) instead of buying it (McLeod, 2013), and can benefit the gas anytime. All Afghan people who do not know how to make biogas(Energy, 2013) canfollow five tips on a Pashto-English poster (Stanojevic, 2011) tomake them able and understand on how to make biogas at least 80% (McLeod, 2013) in two months. FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  14. 1.6 THESIS 3x1x3 Thesis Statement #1 • Assumption: All Afghan people who do not know how to make biogas(Energy, 2013) can follow five tips on a Pashto-English poster (Stanojevic, 2011) to make them able and understand on how to make biogas at least 80% (McLeod, 2013) in two months. Thesis statement: All Afghan, adults, young, andoldpeople who do not know how to make biogas (Hoard, 2008, para.1) can follow five pictures on a Pashto-English poster to make them able and understand on how to make biogas at least 80% in one, two and three weeks(Wiki, 2011, para.10). FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  15. References • Hoard, J. (2008, Octobar 27). Make Your Own Biogas. Retrieved 12, 10, 2013, from http://www.grit.com • Wiki. (2011, December 27). STARTING UP AN ANAEROBIC BIODIGESTER: A HOW TO GUIDE. Retrieved December 10, 2013, from http://opensourceecology.org FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  16. 00% 2 2.0 RUBRIC 2.1 DETAILS 2.2 THEORY 2.3 URGENCY 2.4 REFERENCES 2.5 ASSUMPTION 2.6 THESIS FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  17. assessment rubric: statement of the research problem 00% A* = 90 to 100 A = 80 to 90 B = 70 to 80 C = 60 to 70 D = 50 to 60 F = 0 to 49 [In drafting: PASS or FAIL grade only]

  18. 2.1.1 DETAILS KEYWORDS MATCH FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  19. WEBSITE 2.1.2 DETAILS TITLE AUTHOR DATE PARA.1-2 FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  20. 2.2.1 THEORY KEYWORDS THEORY’S NAME MATCH FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  21. 2.2.2 THEORY WEBSITE AUTHOR TITLE PARA.3 DATE FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  22. 2.3.1 URGENCY KEYWORDS Match FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  23. 2.3.2 URGENCY WEBSITE AUTHOR & Date TITLE PARA.6 FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  24. 2.4 REFERENCES References 00% Fabbs. (2011, March 24). Enhancing Children’s Learning: Insights from Cognitive, Education, and Neuroscience Research. Retrieved December 10, 2013, from http://www.fabbs.org III, J. M. (2013, March 11). News from Afghanistan: Higher Education Needs the Support of International Partners. Retrieved December 10, 2013, from http://www.iie.org University, O. B. (2011). Theories of learning. Retrieved 30 November, 2013, from Oxford Brookes University: http://www.brookes.ac.uk FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  25. 2.5 ASSUMPTION From problem statement to assumption Problem Statement Assumption In three weeks I will design an information poster with 5 pictures taken from the internet in Pashto-English about three ways of enhancing children learning (Fabbs, 2011, para.1-2) to enable junior high school teachers (Oxford Brookes University, 2011, para.3) in Afghanistan , so that the teachers can improve their lecture delivery by using textbooks, photo caption, and visual strategies (Miller, 2013, para.6). Teachers will complete a 6-week seminar and learn how to use interactive teaching methods like role-play and group work while teaching the students (Giving, 2013, para.4), and teachers canlearn to make lesson plans (Fink, 2005), and integrate new curriculum on peace and health into their classes. FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  26. 2.6 THESIS 3x1x3 Thesis Statement #2 • Assumption: Teachers will complete a 6-week seminar and learn how to use interactive teaching methods like role-play and group work while teaching the students (Giving, 2013, para.4), and teachers can learn to make lesson plans (Fink, 2005), and integrate new curriculum on peace and health into their classes. Thesis statement: All teachers, principles and staff who do not know enhancing children learning (Fabbs, 2011, para.1-2) in Afghanistan can follow seven pictures on a poster to use interactive teaching methods such asrole-play, group work, and making lesson plans before or in-between teaching (Giving, 2013, para.4). FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  27. Reference • Fabbs. (2011, March 24). Enhancing Children’s Learning: Insights from Cognitive, Education, and Neuroscience Research. Retrieved December 10, 2013, from http://www.fabbs.org • Giving, G. (2013, March 12). Train Effective Afghan Teachers. Retrieved December 10, 2013, from http://www.globalgiving.org • Fink, D. L. (2005). Integrated course design. Manhattan, KS: The IDEA Center. Retrieved from http://www.theideacenter.org FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  28. 00% 3 3.0 RUBRIC 3.1 DETAILS 3.2 THEORY 3.3 URGENCY 3.4 REFERENCES 3.5 ASSUMPTION 3.6 THESIS FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  29. Mr. SAID ABID: 7solutions to overcome insomnia 00% FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  30. 3.1.1 DETAILS KEYWORDS MATCH FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  31. 3.1.2 DETAILS WEBSITE DATE AUTHOR TITLE PARA.1 FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  32. 3.2.1 THEORY KEYWORDS THEORY’S NAME & MATCH FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  33. WEBSITE 3.2.2 THEORY DATE AUTHOR TITLE Para.4 SECONDARY SOURCE FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  34. 3.3.1 URGENCY KEYWORDS MATCH FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  35. 3.3.2 URGENCY WEBSITE AUTHOR TITLE DATE PARA.1 FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  36. References 3.4 References 00% Geneseo, S. (2013). Hot Topics! College Students & Sleep. Retrieved 30 November, 2013, from Geneseo: www.geneseo.edu Learning-Theories.com. (2007). Elaboration Theory (Reigeluth). Retrieved 30 November, 2013, from Learning-Theories.com: www.learning-theories.com Medicine, A. A. (30 November , 2007). College Students: Getting Enough Sleep is Vital to Academic Success. Retrieved 24 November, 2013, from American Academy of Sleep Medicine: www.aasmnet.org FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  37. 3.5 ASSUMPTION From problem statement to assumption Assumption Problem statement In three weeks, I will design an information poster with 7 pictures from the internet in English about 6 solutions to eliminate insomnia problem for all AIU students (Medicine, 2007, para.1) who are not getting an adequate amount of sleep to follow and learn (Learning-Theories.com, 2007, para.1) to solve insomnia problem (Geneseo, 2013, para.1) by at least 50% in two weeks. All students (Medicine, 2007, para.1) in AIU who are not getting an adequate amount of sleep can follow seven pictures on a poster and learn (Learning-Theories.com, 2007, para.1) toeliminate insomnia problem (Geneseo, 2013, para.1) by at least 50% in two weeks. FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  38. 2.6 THESIS 3x1x3 Thesis Statement #3 Assumption: All students (Medicine, 2007, para.1) in AIU who are not getting an adequate amount of sleep can follow seven pictures on a poster and learn (Learning-Theories.com, 2007, para.1) toeliminate insomnia problem (Geneseo, 2013, para.1) by at least 50% in two weeks. Thesis statement: All IEP, FSP and UGP students (Medicine, 2007, para.1) in AIU who are not getting an adequate amount of sleep can follow seven pictures on a poster and learn (Learning-Theories.com, 2007, para.1) toeliminate insomnia problem (Geneseo, 2013, para.1) by 50% in two weeks, 70% in three weeks and 90% in a month. FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  39. Theoretical Background • The theory of elaboration claims that “the content to be learned should be organized from simple to complex order”. (Learning-Theories.com, 2007, para.1) • The Mayer’s Principles of Multimedia Instruction claims that “people learn better when corresponding words and pictures are presented near each other”. (Mayer, 2011, para.5) • The theory of Repair and Restoration of sleep claims that “sleeping is essential for revitalizing and restoring the physiological processes that keep the body and mind healthy and properly functioning”. (Cherry, 2013, para.3) • The Evolutionary theory suggests that “periods of activity and inactivity evolved as a means of conserving energy”. (Cherry, 2013, para.8) Theoretical Application • In week 1, the design of a poster stage, words and pictures of a poster must be presented near each other for the students to learn and follow (Mayer, 2011, para.5). • In Week 2, the socialization stage, program goals can be obtained from any student who is having sleeping problem (DEVINNEY, 2013, para.2). • Simple instruction can trigger AIU students to distribute the posters in Week 3 and to implement the program in Week 4 (Learning-Theories.com, 2007, para.1). • In the planning stages, the AIU students will be asked to assess their sleeping problems and suggest some possible solutions as well as involve in the finalization of the poster (Community, 2013, para.3). FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  40. Summary / Abstract This research proposal is designed to address the insomnia issue among AIU students in all programme studies. The idea is to introduce and propose some possible solutions to overcome insomnia amongst AiUstudents. The medium I used to convey my ideas is an A3-sized poster. The research proposal runs for four weeks during the first semester of 2013. Participants interested to join in the programme are required to do an online survey and meet once every two weeks to participate in the insomnia assessment, and receive solution guides that are available on a poster to help them along the way. The anticipated outcome of this proposal is that participants are able to overcome their insomnia by 50% in two weeks. The findings may be useful for other people who are having the same problem. FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  41. Methods / Procedures INITIATING - examine the feasibility of the programme DEFINING - identify the expectation or outcome of the programme DRAFTING - design a poster PLANNING - look for other members to conduct the programme - position the members into the place - test a poster with the help of 6 students in one week IMPLEMENTING - conduct an online survey and meeting for participants - post a seven solution poster on the announcement boards at the hostels TABULATING - tabulate the data collected ANALYZING - analyze tabulated data DISCUSSION - evaluate the outcome of two-week process Implementation Timeline Week 1 - design a poster (I will use an A3-sized paper to create a seven-solution poster) Week 2 - socialize 6 selected students to follow a poster and revise a poster by me to publish - poste a seven solution poster by 4 selected group members on the announcement boards at the hostel Week 3 - start the programme (All participants will acquire a 7-point rubric to check their own progress) Week 4 - assess the progress of participants(All my group members will use a 10-point check list to record their progress in every three days) FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  42. Projected Problems • Ignorance - Some AiU students might ignore some simple things such as sleeping habits, because they are busy with something else (CBCNEWS, 2013, para.2). • Recidivism - AiUstudents might fall back to the prior habits that refute the programme goals (Harper, 2010, para.1). Projected Solutions • Seek help from the school – AiU students will do something if they are forced to do (Katemats, 2013, para.1). • The SCREEN model – AiU students can work together with their roommates and friends or it can be meant one pushes another (Ministry, 2008, para.6). FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

  43. Letter of Transmittal 00% FIRST SLIDE LAST SLIDE END SHOW PREVIOUS SLIDE LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDE

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