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Why Revise?

Why Revise?. A look at some of the world’s greatest revisions. Do Now. Show your creative side on a sticky note! Describe life with middle schoolers or life implementing Springboard with…

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Why Revise?

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  1. Why Revise? A look at some of the world’s greatest revisions.

  2. Do Now • Show your creative side on a sticky note! Describe life with middle schoolers or life implementing Springboard with… • a compound sentence (two independent clauses + a fanboyscoordinating conjunction…for, and, nor, but, or. yet, so) • a complex sentence (an independent clause + a subordinating conjunction in a dependent clause… when because, although, while, since, after, though) • a sentence with an appositive

  3. The USA’s National Bird From a Silly Turkey...Revised into…A Majestic Eagle!

  4. The Way We See at Night Flickering Candle… Revised… Glowing Lightbulb!

  5. The Way We Play SimpleWater Toy… Revised… Giant Supersoaker!

  6. The Way We Fly Canvas and Wood… Revised… Steel and Glass!

  7. The Way We Listen Imogen Heap “Hide and Seek”… Revised… Jason DeRulo! “Whatcha Say”

  8. Revision springs from Choices Writers transform writing when they reflect on their purpose audience structures

  9. Written Response: Answer the following: After seeing these real life examples of revision WHY is revision important? What is the difference between revision and editing?

  10. 6 Springboard Unit 4 Read the Unit Overview on page 277 Read the Learning Focus on page 279 Unit Essential Questions • Why is it important to reflect on personal changes and growth? • Why does successful writing require global revision?

  11. 7 Springboard Unit 4 Read the Unit Overview on page 243 Read the Learning Focus on page 245 Unit Essential Questions • Why is it important to revisit, reflect on, and revise previously written texts? • What influences a writer’s choice during the revision process?

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