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作文中存在的问题

作文中存在的问题. 只明词义，不管词性. 1 ． A gunshot broke the tranquil urban. --- A gunshot broke the tranquil urban life . 2. The urban restored tranquil. --- The urban life became tranquil again.

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作文中存在的问题

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  1. 作文中存在的问题

  2. 只明词义，不管词性 1．A gunshot broke the tranquil urban. --- A gunshot broke the tranquil urban life. 2. The urban restored tranquil. --- The urban lifebecame tranquil again.

  3. We know a great many stories about people who, with great courage, manage to succeed. These stories aim to make us courageous. If we learn it by heart and try it by ourselves, I think that we can be more courageous. • At the same time, all of us should hold on to what we are doing, ignoring others’ views, for it is in great need of courage.

  4. 代词指代不明 • We know a great many stories about people who, with great courage, manage to succeed. These stories aim to make us courageous. If we learn it by heart and try it by ourselves, I think that we can be more courageous. • At the same time, all of us should hold on to what we are doing, ignoring others’ views, for it is in great need of courage.

  5. 表达不清，缺少必要的内容 • The man who speaks truth shows courage. • I don’t think I am courageous. I don’t have the courage to speak the truth. I don’t …

  6. The sign of courage a courageous person is some one who feels afraid but still go on to do what he / she believes is right. • Edison got through so many failures and wrong ways that he invented the light at last. • In my opinion, the virtue of courage can be developed. People are afraid when faced with something unknown. So when faced with the situation that we are afraid of, why not try this?

  7. 逻辑错误 • The sign of courage a courageous person issome one who feels afraid but still go on to do what he / she believes is right. • Edison got through so many failures and wrong ways that he invented the light at last. • In my opinion, the virtue of courage can be developed. People are afraid when faced with something unknown. So when faced with the situation that we are afraid of, why not try this?

  8. I hope I can be courageous in the future. With courage，I will face every thing even though I know it’s hard to overcome this obstacle. Life is a challenge. Meet it with courage. Life is a sorrow. Overcome it. Life is a struggle. Accept it with courage.

  9. 前后主语不一致 • I hope I can be courageous in the future. With courage，I will face every thing even though I know it’s hard to overcome this obstacle. Life is a challenge. Meet it with courage. Life is a sorrow. Overcome it. Life is a struggle. Accept it with courage.

  10. At the very time, I realized what had happened. I rushed out and caught the thief with my hand.

  11. 多余的词 • At the very time, I realized what had happened. I rushed out and caught the thief with my hand.

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