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Supporting your Argument. To start, use a format like the following: Topic Sentence: Ms. Hamfeldt is the next Artemis because of her love for others, especially the youth. Support/ Claim1 : Artemis and Ms. Hamfeldt both make caring for all creatures a priority.
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Supporting your Argument • To start, use a format like the following: • Topic Sentence: Ms. Hamfeldt is the next Artemis because of her love for others, especially the youth. • Support/Claim1: Artemisand Ms. Hamfeldtboth make caring for all creatures a priority. • Evidence 1: In fact, Ms. Hamfeldt and her fiance love animals so much that, even though they already have a German shepherd, they will get a cat and an aquarium shortly after their wedding. Meanwhile, Artemis is said to “stir with love for all creation,” indicating how deeply she loves all creatures of the earth (Hamilton 31). • Support/Claim 2: Ms. Hamfeldt and Artemis also share a common passion for helping young people. • Evidence 2: Ms. Hamfeldt has taught students all over Charlotte, and, according to mythology compiler Edith Hamilton, Artemis was considered “protectoress of the dewy youth everywhere” (31). • Concluding Sentence: Ms. Hamfeldt should be the next Artemis because she could continue Artemis’ tradition as caretaker of human and animal kind.