看图作文讲评

1. 看图作文讲评

2. 芳芳是个好学生。请根据下面5幅图用英语写一篇短文，词数120以上.芳芳是个好学生。请根据下面5幅图用英语写一篇短文，词数120以上.

3. 如果单从画面看，所得的信息无非是：一天夜里，风刮得很大。芳芳两点钟起床，赶到学校，把窗户关好后回家。如果单从画面看，所得的信息无非是：一天夜里，风刮得很大。芳芳两点钟起床，赶到学校，把窗户关好后回家。 • 如果你就按上述所看到的信息去写，肯定拿不到高分。这是篇记叙文，记叙了芳芳做好事的前后经过。但记叙离不开人。所以要根据“芳芳是个好学生”这个信息对人物展开合理的想象：Fang Fang is a good student.She lives near her school.This term she was elected monitor of her class.She is a very responsible for her class work.给下面的叙述奠定了基础。

4. 第一步：就事论事 The wind was blowing heavily.

5. Fang Fang got up right away.It was 2 o’clock.

6. she run to the school.

7. She closed the windows of her classroom.

8. She left the classroom and went home.

9. 第二步：合理想象 One night,it was blowing outside.The wind struck the window so heavily that the noise woke up Fang Fang.

10. The wind blowing in through the open window made her feel a bit cold. She knew a heavy rain would soon arrive.She thought of her classroom again. She wondered whether the students on duty had closed the windows properly. She got up and put on her clothes.It was then 2 o’clock.

11. She decided to go out right away,and get to the school before the storm came. She opened the door,and rushed out into the dark. On the way,the strong wind made it difficult for her to go forward quickly.in spite of this,she ran as fast as possible,and after a while she got to the school.

12. She hurried right to her classroom and opened the door.Oh,dear! All the windows were open,and the strong wind filled the classroom with great noise.it was not at all easy for her to shut up all the windows.

13. She turned off the light and was leaving the classroom when she turned around to make sure all things were done well. Just then it began to rain heavily.when she got home,it was already half past three.

14. 第三步：整理成文 • 根据合理的想象和字数限制合成一篇短文 • One night, the wind was blowing outside and struck the window so heavily that the noise woke up Fang Fang. The wind blowing in through the open window made her feel a bit cold.She knew a heavy rain would soon arrive when she wondered whether the students on duty had closed the windows properly. It was then 2 o’clock but she to go out right away,and get to the school before the storm came.She opened the door,and rushed out into the dark.On the way,the strong wind made it difficult for her to go forward quickly.In spite of this,she ran as fast as possible,and after a while she got to the school. She hurried right to her classroom and opened the door.Oh,dear! All the windows were open,and she shut up all the windows one by one. She turned off the light and was leaving the classroom when it began to rain heavily.When she got home,it was already half past three.