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How to improve our English writing

How to improve our English writing. 高考对书面表达的要求. 字数 ( 少于 80 和多于 130 的，从总分中扣除 2 分 ) 书写和标点 ( 较差以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次 ) 文章格式 内容要点信息 语言的丰富性和准确性 结构及连贯性. 书面表达步骤. 书面表达注意事项. 2005 浙江省高考范文分析. 第五档 （ 25 － 30 ） ：完全完成试题规定的任务. 覆盖所有内容要点 应用较多的语法结构和词汇 具备较强的语言应用能力。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使文章结构紧凑 完全达到了预期的写作目的.

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How to improve our English writing

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  1. How to improve our Englishwriting

  2. 高考对书面表达的要求 • 字数 (少于80和多于130的，从总分中扣除2分) • 书写和标点 (较差以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次) • 文章格式 • 内容要点信息 • 语言的丰富性和准确性 • 结构及连贯性 • 书面表达步骤 • 书面表达注意事项 • 2005浙江省高考范文分析

  3. 第五档（25－30） ：完全完成试题规定的任务 • 覆盖所有内容要点 • 应用较多的语法结构和词汇 • 具备较强的语言应用能力。 • 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使文章结构紧凑 • 完全达到了预期的写作目的 第四档（19-24） ： • 虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容 • 应用了语法结构和词汇能够满足任务的要求 • 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致 • 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 • 达到了预期的写作目的

  4. 第三档（13-18）：基本完成试题规定的任务。 • 第二档（6-10） ：末完成试题规定的任务。 • 第一档（1-5)：末完成试题规定的任务。 只能写出与所给要求内容有关的一些单词。 • 0分：末能传达读者任何信息。

  5. 1、审题 （文体、主题、内容、人称、时态） 2、提炼要点，思考关键词 五个步骤 3、紧扣要点，连词成句 ①主语和谓语 ②背景（增加时间、地点条件等） 4、连句成文： ③逻辑关系 ④开头与结尾 ⑤语篇衔接 5、检查修改，规范抄写

  6. Some students think it is not good for people to keep pets in cities, because it will cause pollution to our environment. And the pets always make a noise that will disturb others. However, others think we should see the positive aspects of keeping animals. It is very necessary for the lonely old people to have company and pets can be a good choice. If we can get on well with the animals, it will enrich our life, too. I think if we really love animals, we needn’t show our love to them by keeping them, because the pets are not free and it’s not fair to the animals. If we donate the money used in keeping petsto some animal organizations, it will be more helpful to the animals. (By Dong Shuoyi)

  7. Some say that dogs make a big noise in the community, and sometime they even hurt people. Besides, animal drops also pollute the environment. They don’t agree to have pets in cities. Although I admit all the disadvantages they mentioned, compared to the highlights, pets bring such shortcomings seem to be as small as a pencil tip. As we see, a lovely kitty always keeps the old in company. It may bring good health to the old, as well as joy. And nowadays the harmonious society is being constantly promoted. We humans should live with animal friends in harmony as well. Only in this way can wemake our earth a paradise for all the living. So, choose an animal friend and be a friend to animals. (By Zhuang Chenxi)

  8. 书面表达注意事项 2.使用丰富的词汇 As far as I am concerned, I strongly hold the opinion that this plan should be carried out continually not only because it gives us more space to develop our critical thinking and independent ability but also because we really feel much happier than ever before. 1.增加较复杂的句子结构 3.适当运用结构词和关联词: however, therefore, thus, after a while, all of a sudden, at last, as a result, in fact 等, 使句子 更为流畅。 具体见作文句式1

  9. (1) 强调句 My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had bravely saved my little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had bravely saved my little sister. (2) 倒装句 We can make progress in English only in this way. Only in this waycan we make progress in English. (3) 复合句 I met an old friend in the street. The street was very crowded. I met an old friend in the street, which was very crowded.

  10. (4) 介词短语 Mymothersatin achair.There was a newspaper in her hand.（with 复合结构） My mother sat in a chairwith a newspaper in her hand. She left and did not say goodbye. She leftwithout saying goodbye. (5) 分词短语 He was satisfied with the result, so he decided to go on with a new experiment.（分词做状语） Satisfied with the result, he decided to go on with a new experiment.

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  13. 语篇衔接的过渡词语 • 并列and; as well as ; also; • 选择or; either—or; or else; otherwise • 原因because ; owing to; due to ;on account of ; thanks to • 结果so ; therefore ; thus ; as a result • 时间when ;soon after ; before; later ; first ; and then ; next ; finally ; afterwards. • 比较on the contrary ; on the other hand ; like • 转折but ; yet; however ; although; in spite of ; instead ; • 递进besides ; moreover ; even ; in addition • 举例for example/instance; such as ; that is ; namely ; • 总结after all ; in short ; in general ; generally speaking

  14. 书面表达（满分30分） 你班同学参加了 “二十一世纪中学生英文报组织的一场讨论。 讨论的主题是: 城市内是否可以豢养宠物(狗和猫)。请你根据下表所提供的信息，用英语给报社投稿，介绍讨论情况， 并说明自己的观点和建议。 注意：1.信的开头已为你写好; 2. 词数100左右。 Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.

  15. 饲养宠物 keep pets 污染环境 pollute the environment 吵闹声，甚至伤人 be noisy and may even attack people 安慰孤寡老人 give lonely elderly people comfort 和谐相处 live in harmony with 增添生活情趣 add fun to ….

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