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2. It’s a cinch…just: (1). Read the following sentence. (2). Rewrite it correctly fixing the mistakes. (3). CIRCLE your corrections! Here we go…

3. jackirobinson the first African American major-league baseball player played his first game with the brooklyn dodgers in 1947. Hint: There are SIX corrections.

4. JackiRobinson, the first African American major-league baseball player, played his first game with the Brooklyn Dodgers in 1947. Check your answer… how did you do?

5. Would you believe that over 7000 years ago Ancient egyptians liked to bowl on alleys alot like ours. Hint: There are FIVE errors.

6. Would you believe that over 7,000 years ago ancient Egyptians liked to bowl on alleys a lot like ours? Hint: There are FIVE errors.

7. Before players begun wearing safety gear football produced so many injurys that Colleges often banned the game. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

8. Before players began wearing safety gear, football produced so many injuries that colleges often banned the game. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

9. Jerry Rice hold the nfl record for touchdowns: two hundred five. Hint: There are THREE errors.

10. Jerry Rice holds the NFL record for touchdowns: 205. Hint: There are THREE errors.

11. Until 1892 all professional boxing matches was slugged out with bear fists. Hint: There are THREE errors.

12. Until 1892, all professional boxing matches were slugged out with bare fists. Hint: There are THREE errors.

13. Ill bet you didn’t no that youll sleep through one third of you’re life. Hint: There are FIVE errors.

14. I’ll bet you didn’t know that you’ll sleep through one-third of your life. Hint: There are FIVE errors.

15. canned foods was first developed in order to feed napoleans army. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

16. Canned foods were first developed in order to feed Napolean’s army. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

17. During the middle ages in england beer was oftenest served with breakfast. Hint: There are FIVE errors.

18. During the Middle Ages in England, beer was most often served with breakfast. Hint: There are FIVE errors.

19. in china brides traditionally adorn their selves in bright red. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

20. In China, brides traditionally adorn themselves in bright red. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

21. When a dessert lizard sense danger it vibrates too instantly sink beneath the sand. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

22. When a desert lizard senses danger, it vibrates to instantly sink beneath the sand. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

23. Would you beleive a catapillar have about 4000 muscles in it’s body? Hint: There are FIVE errors.

24. Would you believe a caterpillar has about 4,000 muscles in its body? Hint: There are FIVE errors.

25. A mosquitos wings beats about 1000 times a second the annoying hum comes from it’s beating wings. Hint: There are FIVE errors.

26. A mosquito’s wings beat about 1,000 times a second; the annoying hum comes from its beating wings. Hint: There are FIVE errors.

27. When a llama get mad it spits thick bad-smelling saliva into its enemies face. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

28. When a llama gets mad, it spits thick, bad-smelling saliva into its enemy’s face. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

29. When a llama gets mad, it spits thick, bad-smelling saliva into its enemy’s face. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

30. Lobsters walks around on 8 legs just as spider’s do. Hint: There are THREE errors.

31. Lobsters walk around on eight legs just as spiders do. Hint: There are THREE errors.

32. A baby squirel is born with its eyes closed and it keeps them closed four about a month Hint: There are FOUR errors.

33. A baby squirrel is born with its eyes closed, and it keeps them closed for about a month. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

34. Starfish dont have no legs but they can creep around on alot of little tube feet. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

35. Starfish don’t have legs, but they can creep around on a lot of little tube feet. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

36. The most largest bird is the Ostrich it weigh as much as 300 pounds. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

37. The largest bird is the ostrich; it weighs as much as 300 pounds. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

38. Ostriches cant fly but it can run as fast as forty miles per hour. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

39. Ostriches can’t fly, but they can run as fast as 40 miles per hour. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

40. Are rhinoceros horns which both male and female have mades of hardened hare? Hint: There are FOUR errors.

41. Really, are rhinoceros horns, which both male and female rhinoceros have,made of hardened hair? Hint: There are FOUR errors.

42. Dolphins one of the mostly intelligent creatures on this earth lives in the ocean. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

43. Dolphins, one of the most intelligent creatures on this earth,live in the ocean. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

44. Pluto the most small planet in our solar system travel around the sun every 248 years. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

45. Pluto, the smallest planet in our solar system, travels around the sun every 248 years. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

46. It takes the moon a little more than twenty-seven day’s about a month to orbit Earth. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

47. It takes the moon a little more than 27 days, about a month, to orbit Earth. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

48. Earth move threw space at sixty six thousand seven hundred miles per hour Hint: There are FOUR errors.

49. Earth moves through space at 66,700 miles per hour. Hint: There are FOUR errors.

50. If you had read the assignment you would of discovered that skin are the larger organ of the human body. Hint: There are FOUR errors.