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May 12, 2010 Organization Day 5

May 12, 2010 Organization Day 5. How does the author organize the tool information in this essay? Is this an effective organizational tool? Why or why not? How would the essay’s clarity be affect if the bulleted items were rewritten as a paragraph?. Today we will:.

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May 12, 2010 Organization Day 5

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  1. May 12, 2010Organization Day 5 • How does the author organize the tool information in this essay? • Is this an effective organizational tool? Why or why not? • How would the essay’s clarity be affect if the bulleted items were rewritten as a paragraph?

  2. Today we will: • Practice sentence combining. • Read silently. • Find two or three sentences in your reading that your could successfully combine. • Be prepared to show your classmates. • Prepare presentation • Have you summarized your assignment? • Have you chosen an important speech to share? • Are there any important characters?

  3. Combine the following sentences. • Dorothea Lange was hired by the government. • She photographed migrant workers. • She did this during the Great Depression.

  4. During the Great Depression, Dorothea Lange was hired by the government to photograph migrant workers. • Dorothea Lange was hired by the government, and she photographed migrant workers, which she did during the Great Depression. • During the Great Depression, Dorothea Lange photographed migrant workers, and she was hired by the government. • Dorothea Lange, who photographed migrant workers, was hired by the government, and this was during the Great Depression.

  5. Combine the sentences. • I entered my new school. • My mother was with me. • I was whistling and smiling.

  6. Whistling and smiling, my mother entered my new school with me. • Entering my new school, my mother was with me, whistling and smiling. • As I entered the new school with my mother, I was whistling and smiling. • I entered the new school with my mother because I was whistling and smiling.

  7. Homework • Remember when your presentation is due. • Tomorrow and Friday we will be doing HSA preparation.

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