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Perplexing Pursuit: A Detective's Tale

A man nervously waits on the hardened ground, terrified by the cold night and industrial threat approaching. Has your partner crafted an atmospheric scene, intriguing characters, and captivating events? Is there a sense of mystery and effective use of dialogue?

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Perplexing Pursuit: A Detective's Tale

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  1. Show and tell: whichiswhich? • He wasnervouslywaiting • Themanwasscared • A frosthadhardenedthegroundunderfoot. • Thenightwascold • He backedaway as if industrial machinerywasmovingtowardshim • Themantappedhisfootrelentlessly

  2. Checklist: has yourpartner done thefollowing? • Establishedatmospherewiththedescription of theopeningscenes? • Createdinterest in thecharacters? • Includedoneortwoeventsthat ´hook´thereadersattention. • Isthereanelement of shock/mystery/somethingstrange? • Havetheyshownthereaderwhatis happening? • Has dialogue beenusedeffectively? (optional) Can youthink of anythingelse?

  3. Detective opening - markcriteria

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