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COLLEGE APPLICATION ESSAYS

COLLEGE APPLICATION ESSAYS. English 11 2012-2013. Personal Statement. In reading your application, they want to get to know you as well as they can . There's a limit to what grades and test scores can tell them so they ask you to write a personal statement.

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COLLEGE APPLICATION ESSAYS

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  1. COLLEGE APPLICATION ESSAYS English 11 2012-2013

  2. Personal Statement • In reading your application, they want to get to know you as well as they can. There's a limit to what grades and test scores can tell them so they ask you to write a personal statement. • Your personal statement is your chance to tell them who you are and what's important to you. Think of it as your opportunity to introduce yourself to the admissions and scholarship officers reading your application. Be open, be honest, be real. What you tell them in your personal statement gives readers the context to better understand the rest of the information you've provided in your application.

  3. Tips & Techniques • Read each prompt carefully and be sure to respond to all parts. • Use specific, concrete examplesto support the points you want to make. • Finally, relax. This is one of many pieces of information they consider in reviewing your application; an admission decision will not be based on your personal statement alone.

  4. Tips & Techniques • Start Early: Allow time for reflection, thoughtful preparation. • Choose a Topic: Look critically at the information in your application: your grades, awards, activities and work experience, family and income. Anticipate questions an admissions evaluator will have after reading your application. The personal statement is your opportunity to answer those questions.

  5. Tips & Techniques • Write Naturally: Present your information and ideas in a focused, deliberate and meaningful manner. Provide specific, concrete examples to support your point. A personal statement that is simply a list of qualities or accomplishments usually is not persuasive.

  6. Tips & Techniques • Prepare an Outline: In order to write a successful essay, you must organize your thoughts. By taking what’s already in your head and putting it to paper, you are able to see connections and links between ideas more clearly. This structure serves as a foundation for your paper. Use either an outline or a diagram to jot down your ideas and organize them.

  7. Tips & Techniques • Keep your focus narrow and personal: Your essay must prove a single point or thesis. The reader must be able to find your main idea following it from beginning to end. Show them who you are.

  8. Tips & Techniques • Proofread: In addition to checking your spelling, be sure your grammar is correct and your essays flow smoothly. • Solicit feedback: Your personal statement should reflect your own ideas and be written by you alone, but others — family, teachers and friends — can offer valuable suggestions. Ask advice of whomever you like, but do not plagiarize from sources in print or online and do not use anyone's published words but your own.

  9. Tips & Techniques Prove It: Develop your main idea with vivid and specific facts, events, quotations, examples, and reasons. There's a big difference between simply stating a point of view and letting an idea unfold in the details: • Okay: "I like to be surrounded by people with a variety of backgrounds and interests" • Better: "During that night, I sang the theme song from Casablanca with a baseball coach who thinks he's Bogie, discussed Marxism with a little old lady, and heard more than I ever wanted to know about some woman's gall bladder operation."

  10. Tips & Techniques Don't Tell Them What You Think They Want to Hear: Most admissions officers read plenty of essays about the charms of their university, the evils of terrorism, and the personal commitment involved in being a doctor. Bring something new to the table, not just what you think they want to hear. Don't Write a Resume: Don't include information that is found elsewhere in the application. Your essay will end up sounding like an autobiography, travelogue, or laundry list. Yawn.

  11. Tips & Techniques • Okay: "I want to help people. I have gotten so much out of life through the love and guidance of my family, I feel that many individuals have not been as fortunate; therefore, I would like to expand the lives of others." • Better: "My Mom and Dad stood on plenty of sidelines 'til their shoes filled with water or their fingers turned white, or somebody's golden retriever signed his name on their c

  12. Tips & Techniques • Don't Use 50 Words When Five Will Do: Eliminate unnecessary words. • Okay: "Over the years it has been pointed out to me by my parents, friends, and teachers—and I have even noticed this about myself, as well—that I am not the neatest person in the world.” • Better: "I'm a slob."

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