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Learn how to build, analyze, and transition themes into a rough draft thesis. Collect evidence, analyze textual illustrations, and create a conversational outline between sources for a robust argument.
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Building the Synthesis Moving from Notes to Draft
Brainstorming • Using the Synthesis Worksheets • Review the lists of themes (right hand column) and look for patterns. • What exact repetitions do you see? Which words emerge in multiple places? • What kinds of strands or related words do you see? • What themes intrigue or attract you?
Analyzing Textual Evidence in Depth Example: This scene/this quotation could mean ____________, and yet it could also signify ____. Additionally, we can read __________ as ___________. Illustration/Evidence
Freewriting • Freewrite (5 minutes) • Introduce the first, strongest Illustration or piece of Evidence • A line of dialogue • A direct quote • The description of a scene • Explain or analyze that evidence • What do we learn from this piece of evidence? • Why is this so important? • Sample: This scene/this quotation could mean ____________, and yet it could also signify ____. Additionally, we can read __________ as ___________. • Sample 2: Although this scene shows _____________, it also reminds the reader that ____________.
Moving from Theme to (Rough Draft) Thesis • Freewriting • What does each source say about this idea? • Freewriting Prompt 1: After reading/watching __________ and _________, we learn that ____________. We also learn that __________________. • What tensions or contradictions might be inherent in this idea? • E.g. _________ seems to be saying __________, and yet it is also saying _______________.
Moving from Theme to (Rough Draft) Thesis • Drafting • Begin composing a Rough Draft thesis based on your notes. • After reading Source A and B, what have we learned about ______________?
Collecting Evidence • Look through your notes and the readings or film with your rough draft thesis in front of you. • Gather Illustrations/Textual evidence that will support your argument. • Find at least 3 quotations or scenes from each source. • Gather additional evidence that might complicate or deepen your argument. • Begin to Explain or Analyze your Illustration. • Do this step in a rough draft capacity before putting it all together. That is, analyze each piece of evidence carefully and fully before deciding where everything will go.
Moving from Evidence to Outline • Begin a Conversation between Sources • Find a clear, strong Illustration or piece of Evidence from Source A that you can put in conversation with a clear, strong Illustration from Source B. • Throughout the essay, you will want to move between the sources. • Create an Outline • Begin with the two pieces of Evidence above. • Build your Outline based on the conversational model • How does Source A speak back to Source B – and vice versa? • See Notes on Synthesis Handout for a sample outline. • Understand that your Outline, like a Conversation, will remain fluid and changeable.