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This guide outlines how to craft a formal complaint letter effectively. It addresses important considerations, such as identifying the recipient, clarifying the purpose of the letter, and determining the appropriate tone. Key elements include stating the issue clearly, providing relevant details, and expressing feelings constructively. The letter should be structured with a proper greeting and a clear outline of what you want to achieve. Emphasizing a positive tone and acknowledging any good aspects can help maintain a constructive dialogue, even when addressing grievances.
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Letters of COMPLAINT PRC 25S – St. Maurice School October 22, 2013
Recall: Preparing for tone • Why am I writing? • To whom am I writing? • What do I want them to understand? • What kind of tone should I use?
Why am I writing? • What might we write complaints about? To companies: To individuals:
To whom am I writing? • Someone who can resolve things • Once “lower” avenues have been tried • Employer, HR representative • Company president, CEO
What do I want them to understand? • The situation • How you feel • Why you feel how you feel • Why you shouldn’t have been made to feel how you feel • What you wish had been done • What you think should be done
What kind of tone should I use? • Non-antagonistic • Possibly friendly (what does this depend on?) • Authoritative • Not dictatorial • Confidently, professionally • Constructive
Structuring • Appropriate greeting Bad Good
Structuring • Heading • Identifies the issue/product/service/person • Use a code or reference number (if applicable) “Re: Shipping for Order #860925”
Structuring • State the simple facts • Add relevant dates and details Bad Good
Structuring • State what you’d like to happen • Try to be positive Bad Good
How angry to sound • Determine the magnitude of the offense • Examine how communications have proceeded thus far • Decide whether or not you want to keep the bridge • Always include some positive or complimentary comment