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This session emphasizes the importance of integrating quotes in your writing, particularly for rhetorical analysis. We discuss participation points, the direct feedback protocol for free-writes, and the critical guidelines for quoting and paraphrasing. Learn when to incorporate quotes to enhance your points and ensure they support your analysis effectively. We will also address late penalties, attendance, and the significance of adhering to directions. Participants will engage in exercises to analyze quotes related to a provided thesis statement in preparation for upcoming assignments.
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Week Six Integrating and Evaluating Quotes
Housekeeping • How participation points work • I’m not going to be returning all of your free-writes • If you want commentary on a specific one, send me an email. • Remember that you need to follow all directions.
Housekeeping • How participation points work • I’m not going to be returning all of your free-writes • If you want commentary on a specific one, send me an email. • Remember that you need to follow all directions. • Late penalties: I need to have a copy of your assignment before it is due or I cannot waive these. • Absences are starting to accumulate. Remember the consequences of too many absences
In your notes When do you quote? When do you paraphrase?
When to do what • Quote: • When you want to emphasize a point about the wording that the author chose to use. • When you can’t say something better than the author did. • Paraphrase: • When the exact wording isn’t important. You can usually summarize here as well.
Quotes cannot stand alone • You can’t have a sentence that just consists of a quote. You need to introduce the quote in some way, usually with a signal phrase, and then cite. • Mr. Durbin says, “This is how to do it” (Durbin 5). • Section 13b in your handbook has a good list of signal phrases. • Note the punctuation here. • You can also use quotes as part of your sentence, where your content matches that of the quote • Mr. Durbin “likes these kinds of quotes,” but not when people “quote” every “other” word (Durbin 5). • Note the punctuation here as well
There will be two kinds of quotes Content Quotes Rhetorical examples Most of your quotes will be used to exemplify the rhetoric. When you will explain them, you will not discuss what they mean, but what they do. • Use these sparingly. These convey content from the source text, like what the author’s argument is, or one of their details. • Remember that this information is not that important in your analysis.
Our thesis statement • In the video “Imagine,” Ron Paul uses allusions, suggestive imagery, and hypothetical situations to effectively persuade Texan voters that if they vote for him, he will end the war.
A quote that supports our thesis statement • In the video “Imagine,” Ron Paul uses allusions, suggestive imagery, and hypothetical situations to effectively persuade Texan voters that if they vote for him, he will end the war. • “Imagine that for every American killed, ten more would take up arms against them, resulting in perpetual bloodshed.”
Let’s analyze the rhetoric Of this quote
Free write • Choose one more quote from the video that supports our thesis statement, and write an analysis for it.
Free write Homework • Watch the Presidential Debate (I will provide a link on my blog when it goes online) and identify 3 rhetorical choices that each candidate makes.