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This piece provides a structured approach for giving meaningful feedback on writing. It encourages reflection on mood, surprising ideas, and personal connections to the content. By prompting critical thinking about vivid imagery, unanswered questions, and areas for more detail, it helps writers enhance their work. Praise is balanced with constructive suggestions to guide revisions. Whether it's about clarity, depth, or emotional impact, this approach seeks to foster growth and improvement in writing, making it a valuable resource for any project.
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P-P-N-P Give Meaningful Responses To Any Writing
Place the Project Here are some questions for you to think about: • What mood/tone did this piece create for you? • What was the most surprising idea about this piece? Why? • Can you relate this piece to a story from your life? Examples of met… This reminds me of _______________________________. This part of your paper made me feel ____________________. I was surprised when you said _____________________ because _____________________.
Point/Summarize Here are some questions for you to think about: • Which part of the paper could you picture in your head? What made it stand out? • Is there a question that really makes you think? What is it? • Where in the story is there great description or word choice? What makes it outstanding? Examples of met… Your use of this particular quote (_______________) is very powerful because __________________. Your conclusion clearly helps me understand ________________. Your example of ____________ helped me understand _________.
Nudge Here are some questions for you to think about: • Are there places in the writing that the person needs to add description, information or examples? • Is there a moment that is confusing or unclear? • Where does there need to be more detail? • Where are there gaps in logic or time that need to be addressed? Examples of met… I think your piece would benefit from _________________. I’m not sure I believe your argument about _____________. Your thesis statement needs some revision because ___________.
Praise Here are some questions for you to think about: What is the original idea or reason for the piece? What did you like about the piece? What advice can you give them while praising their work? Examples of met I really wanted to keep reading your paper because _______. You have some excellent ideas for this piece. Try to find a way to show _________________. The dialogueyou chose worked, but _______________________.