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In this engaging script, we find Mel and Sid sitting on a cold, dark night on a green park bench. The atmosphere is thick with tension as their dialogue reveals deep insights about their lives and dreams. Mel dreams of sunny holidays, while Sid dismisses these thoughts, bringing a sense of realism to the conversation. The scene captures the nuances of friendship, unspoken worries, and the struggles faced in a concrete reality, making it a relatable piece for anyone who has shared quiet moments filled with unsaid words.
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4/21/14 Journal # 40 • You tell a joke to a friend, and you hear laughter from someone else; you turn and see your stalker…
sonnet • A 14 line lyric poem written in iambic pentameter and ending in a rhymed couplet • The Prologue to Romeo and Juliet is a sonnet
It is a dark, cold night and Mel and Sid are sitting on a green park bench. The street lights are dim and the sound of the traffic can just be heard in the background. Mel: Ooh its so cold out here, do you think it might rain? Sid: (Shrugs his shoulders) Dunno. Mel: Not very talkative tonight are you? What’s up? Sid: (Huffs and stretches legs out) Dunno. Mel: I was thinking about my holiday, (looks up to the sky) all that sun and luxury. Sid: Dunno what for, it ain’t ever gonna ‘appen. Setting the scene
It is a dark, cold night and Mel and Sid are sitting on a green park bench. The street lights are dim and the sound of the traffic can just be heard in the background. Mel: Ooh its so cold out here, do you think it might rain? Sid: (Shrugs his shoulders) Dunno. Mel: Not very talkative tonight are you? What’s up? Sid: (Huffs and stretches legs out) Dunno. Mel: I was thinking about my holiday, (looks up to the sky) all that sun and luxury. Sid: Dunno what for, it ain’t ever gonna ‘appen. Characters, when they speak you don’t need Quotation marks!
It is a dark, cold night and Mel and Sid are sitting on a green park bench. The street lights are dim and the sound of the traffic can just be heard in the background. Mel: Ooh its so cold out here, do you think it might rain? Sid: (Shrugs his shoulders) Dunno. Mel: Not very talkative tonight are you? What’s up? Sid: (Huffs and stretches legs out) Dunno. Mel: I was thinking about my holiday, (looks up to the sky) all that sun and luxury. Sid: Dunno what for, it ain’t ever gonna ‘appen. Stage directions, tell the actors what to do on stage.
It is a dark, cold night and Mel and Sid are sitting on a green park bench. The street lights are dim and the sound of the traffic can just be heard in the background. Mel: Ooh its so cold out here, do you think it might rain? Sid: (Shrugs his shoulders) Dunno. Mel: Not very talkative tonight are you? What’s up? Sid: (Huffs and stretches legs out) Dunno. Mel: I was thinking about my holiday, (looks up to the sky) all that sunand luxury. Sid: Dunno what for, it ain’t ever gonna ‘appen. What the actors say. (Dialogue.)
It is a dark, cold night and Mel and Sid are sitting on a green park bench. The street lights are dim and the sound of the traffic can just be heard in the background. Mel: Ooh its so cold out here, do you think it might rain? Sid: (Shrugs his shoulders)Dunno.L Mel: Not very talkative tonight are you? What’s up? Sid: (Huffs and stretches legs out)Dunno. Mel: Dunno what for, it ain’t ever gonna ‘appen. l
Format: • Napoleon Dynamite
4/22/14 Journal #48 • Duct tape can fix anything. Well, almost anything…
suspense • A feeling of tension in the reader in regard to the well-being of the protagonist
Script Practice • Example types of scipts
Script Writing Work Day • Your 5 page Script must be completed by the end class on Thursday • Friday will be practice day • Monday – you will direct your screen play
4/23/14 Journal #49 • You hear a baby crying, but you know you are alone…
suspense • A feeling of tension in the reader in regard to the well-being of the protagonist
Script Writing Work Day • Your 5 page Script must be completed by the end class on Thursday • Friday will be practice day • Monday – you will direct your screen play
4/24/14 Journal #40 • Place: on a boat • Character: an elderly rabbi • Object: a digital camera • Weather: brisk
symbol • An item or element of story that is used to represent something else
Script Writing Work Day • Your 5 page Script must be completed by the end class on Thursday • Friday will be practice day • Monday – you will direct your screen play