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Sophomore Persuasive Essay. What is a thesis statement?.
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What is a thesis statement? • A thesis statement is a concise opinion statement that tells your reader what your essay will be about. It is a guide for your essay. It can be argued. It is in the first paragraph, and it is most likely the last sentence in the first paragraph.
Working Thesis • You should start with a “working” thesis. It is expected that you might have to revise your thesis in the process of writing your essay. The evidence you gather may lead you to a conclusion you didn't think you'd reach.
What does TWB formula stand for? Thesis with Blueprint A thesis with a blueprint is an easy way to organize a five-paragraph essay. The “blueprint” is a map or guide for your paper. It will tell the reader what you will cover in your 2nd, 3rd, and 4th paragraph.
TWB Formula Limited subject + precise opinion (because, with, by, through, when) Item, item, item Limited subject + precise opinion (because, with, by, through, when) item, item, item
TWB Backwards (because, with, by, through, when) Item, item, item limited subject + precise opinion (Because, with, by, through, when) item, item, item limited subject + precise opinion
Example of TWB Chick-fil-A is unsurpassed as the best fast food restaurant in Arizona because of their delicious chicken, outstanding employees and service, and low prices.
Example of Backwards TWB • Because of their delicious chicken, outstanding employees and service, and low prices, Chick-fil-A is unsurpassed as the best fast food restaurant in Arizona.
Helpful Links • http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html • http://www.sdst.org/shs/library/thesis.html • http://www.camlang.com/sp004.htm • http://www.asmadrid.org/library/thesis_statement.htm • http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html
The 5 paragraph essay • Introduction • 1st paragraph • Body Paragraphs • 2nd paragraph • 3rd paragraph • 4th paragraph • Conclusion • 5th paragraph
Introduction • Opens with a hook • Transitions to Thesis with Blueprint
Body • Each body paragraph corresponds to the “item,item,item” in the blueprint • Topic sentence at the beginning of each paragraph-relates directly to one of the “items” in the blueprint. • Only info that directly relates to the topic sentence should be in each paragraph!
Body • Incorporate EXPLANATIONS (your thoughts/opinions on the topic.) • Back explanation with EVIDENCE (quotes, statistics, facts.)
Conclusion • Restate thesis. • Wrap up essay. • Don’t introduce any new information! • End with a bang—something interesting, intelligent, and thought-provoking.