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Explore how Manning's healed arm, connection with pass catchers, and addition of Wes Welker will secure an NFL championship. Witness the triumph of the Broncos and the surprise of detractors at season's end.
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Conclusions • Re-state your thesis • Transition? • End with a broad statement (if it connects to your hook you are doing it right).
Sample Re-stating of thesis • It is clear that the combination of Manning’s healed arm, his increased familiarity with pass catchers, and his new a safety blanket named Wes Welker will lead to an NFL championship.
Sample Ending • When the 2013-2014 season is over Manning’s Broncos will ride off triumphant, leaving his detractors scratching their ‘noodles’ in astonishment.
Transition? • It is clear that the combination of Manning’s healed arm, his increased familiarity with pass catchers, and his new a safety blanket named Wes Welker will lead to an NFL championship. • <Transition?> • When the 2013-2014 season is over Manning’s Broncos will ride off triumphant, leaving his detractors scratching their ‘noodles’ in astonishment.
Sample Conclusion • It is clear that the combination of Manning’s healed arm, his increased familiarity with pass catchers, and his new a safety blanket named Wes Welker will lead to an NFL championship. Indeed, when the 2013-2014 season is over Manning’s Broncos will ride off triumphant, leaving his detractors scratching their ‘noodles’ in astonishment.