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This lecture delves into the vital role of pronouns in creating cohesion and unity in writing. Using the character Briony from Ian McEwan's novel "Atonement" as a reference, we explore her complex narrative journey and the significance of pronouns in ensuring clarity for readers. Quality writing demands careful pronoun use to maintain clear antecedents. By reviewing our pronoun choices and seeking feedback, we enhance our writing clarity and strengthen our craft. Discover how mastering pronoun reference can transform your writing!
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L612 Pronoun Reference Lecture 4 Pronouns and Cohesion in Writing
Pronouns and Cohesion in Writing Paragraphs must have… • Unity • Cohesion • Use Pronouns!
Pronouns and Cohesion in Writing Briony, the protagonist of Ian McEwan’s novel Atonement, is a 13 year old English girl. It’s the summer of 1935 and Briony finds herself getting caught up in layer upon layer of trouble. Briony loves writing and performing in plays. Tormented by Briony’s cousins’ lack of interest in listening to Briony’s direction, Briony seeks solace in her family’s gardens. There, Briony sees her older sister Cecelia flirting with the maid’s son Robbie, then Briony finds Robbie’s obscene note to Cecelia. Things begin to go awry for Briony. The novel takes the reader from Briony’s young life to Briony’s old age and throughout the story, we feel every bit of agony Briony’s life has given Briony. Nothing is as it seems and nothing comes to light until the end of this brilliant novel!
Pronouns and Cohesion in Writing Briony, the protagonist of Ian McEwan’s novel Atonement, is a 13 year old English girl. It’s the summer of 1935 and she finds herself getting caught up in layer upon layer of trouble. Briony loves writing and performing in plays. Tormented by her cousins’ lack of interest in listening to her direction, she seeks solace in her family’s gardens. There, she sees her older sister Cecelia flirting with the maid’s son Robbie, then she finds Robbie’s obscene note to Cecelia. Things begin to go awry for Briony. The novel takes us from her young life to her old age, and throughout the story, we feel every bit of agony Briony’s life has given her. Nothing is as it seems and nothing comes to light until the end of this brilliant novel!
Pronouns and Cohesion in Writing WRITING HINT: When you use pronouns in writing it’s clear to you what the antecedents are. However, it may not be clear to the reader. Try reading your writing from an objective point of view, specifically looking at all of the pronouns to see if they are clearly presented. Also, get a friend or classmate to read your writing. See if they are able to identify the antecedents for ALL of your pronouns.
Pronouns and Cohesion in Writing WRITING HINT: Checking your pronoun use every time you write actually can make you a stronger writer. It forces you to think about everything you write and how your ideas relate to one another. Thisensures clarity in thinking and writing!
