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I only made slight changes to my double page spread. The first change I made was the image. When printed the image was blurry and unfocused. Furthermore the actual image was not great as you could only see two band members and both where preparing to perform which is not as effective as an image of them actually playing. This change in image also meant that I had to change the colour of the text of the by-line to white.
To the text, I added an extra space in order to fill the blank space at the bottom of the article. I also imported another ‘feature’ image and positioned at the top of the page which is of a similar style to that of the magazine I analysed.