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Detailed comments from Alan Chickinsky of Litton/TASC on inconsistencies, missing references, and editorial enhancements for Clause 11.
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TGI Draft Clause 11 Comments Alan Chickinsky Litton/TASC May 15, 2001 Alan Chickinsky, Litton/TASC
Editoral • Comment 1335, 1228, 404 • “Asso-ciateFailureTimeout” • Comment 1495 • past-tense disagreement Alan Chickinsky, Litton/TASC
Missing Reference • Comment 1187 • Add reference to Figure 5-5 Alan Chickinsky, Litton/TASC
Inconsistancs • Comment 601 and 602 • Handled by section 5 group Alan Chickinsky, Litton/TASC
Editoral-Missing Word • Comment 405 • Add the word “not” to If the STA is not authenticated, the AP shall transmit a Deauthentication frame to the STA. Alan Chickinsky, Litton/TASC
Reformat • Comment 1496 • Add reference to Figure 5-5 • Add states to Figure 5-5 with “”State 3” and “State 4” link to new state of “Authenticated” Alan Chickinsky, Litton/TASC