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Discover the art of specific word choice and strong verbs to enhance your writing. This guide emphasizes the importance of using vivid, action-oriented language over bland adjectives and adverbs. Learn how to incorporate similes, metaphors, and sensory details, and engage your readers with dialogue. Transform mundane expressions into lively narratives, using powerful verbs that paint a picture in the mind. Join us in exploring effective techniques to make your writing not only descriptive but also compelling and immersive.
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SHOW, DON’T TELL… • SDT relies on great word choice. Remember to: • 1. Use similes and metaphors • 2. Use dialogue • 3. Use sensory details • 4. Effective word choice
What does specific word choice mean? • Rely on STRONG VERBS. ~Too often we focus on adjectives and adverbs being our descriptive words. Use exciting verbs instead! • Eliminate unnecessary adjectives and adverbs.
For example… • The lion ferociously ate the gazelle. • OR …. • The lion devoured the gazelle.
Examples, continued… ~You could say “She yawned sleepily” ~But it’s more exciting to say “Her mouth gaped open as wide as the Grand Canyon as a yawn escaped from her lips.”
Examples… • The Buffalo injured the hunter. • OR… • The Buffalo gored the hunter.
YOUR TURN…. (we will share!) • He was hit by the bus. • He yelled angrily at the referee. • She laughed loudly at the cartoon. • The teacher looked meanly at the student. • The dog jumped excitedly.