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Woloboloo is an extremely pink and weird-looking alien that stands out in his colorful planet. He features two short, little arms and two tiny, round legs, giving him a quirky appearance. Spikes on his head add an evil vibe, but his warm smile reveals his kind nature. He has striking yellow teeth and a large, bright red tongue, while his three eyes, particularly the large one in the center, look very odd. Woloboloo lives in a vibrant world with a dark sky, a green moon, and tall rocks. He eagerly wishes to join Mr. Craighead's class.
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LO: To write a description in the present tense The alien is pink and weird. He has 2 arms and 2 legs. He has spikes on his head. He has yellow teeth and a red tongue. He has 3 eyes.
LO: To improve a description in the present tense The alien is pink and weird. He has 2 arms and 2 legs. He has spikes on his head. He has yellow teeth and a red tongue. He has 3 eyes.
LO: To improve a description in the present tense The alien is extremely pink and weird looking which makes him seem crazy. He has 2 short, little arms and 2 tiny, round legs. The (He has) spikes on his head make him look evil, however his smile makes him look kind. He has horrible yellow teeth and a large, bright red tongue. His large eye in the middle of his head looks very odd! (He has 3 eyes.)
The planet is colourful but the sky is dark. The moon is green. The rocks are tall.
Dear Mr Craighead, My name is Woloboloo and I am writing to you because I would really love to join your class. Thank you for reading my letter and I hope that I can join your class soon. Yours happily, Woloboloo