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One aspect of my opening sequence idea my group liked was the use of flashbacks when you see the what happened the night, she died • They said it is a cool concept to include flashbacks as they more detail to the story and make it idea clearer of what happened to her but still adds mystery of who the boy is, she is fighting with the night she dies- explains the plot without giving too much away and without telling the audience what will happen • They also liked the idea of having a montage of images to do with her death and what happened to her like the bloody knife, broken glass and the flashing party lights- they said these are all creepy and scary images that fit the stereotypical views of the genre horror which I'm trying to portray in my ideas • Audience become interested in the relationship between the boy and the girl what what will happen to the boy as we assume he is the one that killed her which makes it a creepy turn as we just though in the beginning they are in a relationship with each other. Intrigues the audience as they to find out the whole story so the opening sequence hooks the audience • The theme of abuse between boyfriends and girlfriends is very relevant in todays world so it is easily relatable when you see the boyfriend physically and mentally abusing her Idea 1 - Feedback
Idea 2 Feedback • The second idea is really mysterious as she gets taken and then you see she get sold it makes you think about all the other kids you see on the website and what happens to them after there sold and who is buying these kids- very creepy as it is old men/ couple interested in buying these young vulnerable children it makes you think what they want with them. • It is a cool concept as the idea starts of really overly positive with it being a sunny day and the mother and daughter going to the park, getting ice cream and the other kids at the park it creates this ideal happy situation and then there is binary opposition between the scene where it become really dark. It shows how a positive situation can be ruined and turn dark in a split second. Likes the ideas of the child being sold online because when the child gets taken you assume it is just a kidnapping but it become more sinister and haunting when you find out the kidnaper is part of a child trafficking ring- unexpected turn • The audience an be sympathetic toward the mother and child when they are taken as people can sympathize with the pain of what it is like to loose someone. This will make the viewers intrigued on what will happen to the child and its fate. Viewers will be thinking of the distraught mother as she will be blaming herself for losing the child as she went away for a second and the child is now missing. As well the fact it is a little girl makes her more vulnerable so the audience will be more sad with the fate of the little girl
Idea 3 Feedback • A reasonably simple idea to make, very safe and easy idea with a simple story to follow. An easy structure and idea to follow and make come to life. The fact there is a big explosion at the end adds the element of danger and suspense of what has happened this fit in to the stereotypical view of action big explosion and fire at the end of scene to add suspense. However the explosion could be a hard thing to film and the car on fire. So explosion may have to happen of camera and the fire may have to be changed as it will be difficult to portray that while making it look good • It’s a really exciting as they break into the house and it gives you that adrenal rush of what's going to happen will they get caught are the owners of the house going to walk in. Are the police going to come. The diegetic sounds of the police siren in the background building into a crescendo install fear in the audience as we know the police are on there way and we think how are the robbers going to escape. When they get caught in the police chase it also gives adrenal as we know they are going to get caught and the fate is inevitable • Criticisms could be that you could relate the break in to society struggles between the rich and poor. So instead of a group of adult have a group of young vulnerable kid stealing to make ends meant and a little bit of food as they have been starved for days from a rich entitled family who are arrogant and don’t ever give back to society of charity. So instead of feeling bad for the family we feel more sympathy to the kids as they don’t have it easy although it was right for them to steal we see they were only doing it to survive. This makes us more emotional at the end in the big crash as they are only young and have a whole life ahead of them so it will be sad if the died.
