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Exercise 18

Exercise 18. No.1. (Worse) It is important to develop a more effective approach to solve the complicated problem. (Better) A more effective approach must be developed to solve the complicated problem. No.2. (Worse) There were nine observations taken for each trial run.

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Exercise 18

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  1. Exercise 18

  2. No.1 • (Worse) It is important to develop a more effective approach to solve the complicated problem. • (Better) A more effective approach must be developed to solve the complicated problem.

  3. No.2 • (Worse)There were nine observations taken for each trial run. • (Better) Each trial run included nine observations.

  4. No.3 • (Worse) There is a chance that multifunction printers include many additional utilities. • (Better) Multifunction printers may include many additional utilities.

  5. No.4 • (Worse) It is crucial that an ink jet printer is more versatile than a laser printer. • (Better) An ink jet printer must be more versatile than a laser one.

  6. No.5 • (Worse) There can be little doubt that ink jet printers have a higher per-page cost than laser printers. • (Better) Ink jet printers undoubtedly cost more per page than laser ones.

  7. No.6 • (Worse) It is quite probable that an ink jet printer is a better choice than a laser printer if initial cost is the primary consideration. • (Better) An ink jet printer is probably a better choice than a laser one if initial cost is the primary consideration.

  8. No.7 • (Worse) There is a comparison made in this article of the major differences between commercially successful keyboards. • (Better) This article compares the major differences between commercially successful keyboards.

  9. No.8 • (Worse) It is unlikely that ink jet printers will become obsolete owing to their relatively low cost. • (Better) Ink jet printers will unlikely become obsolete owing to their relatively low cost.

  10. No.9 • (Worse) It is not necessary to train the network in all instances. • (Better) The network does not need to be trained in all instances.

  11. No.10 • (Worse) It is possible to configure Windows NT so that a password is required at the workstation. • (Better) Windows NT can be configured to require a password at the workstation.

  12. No.11 • (Worse) There is an opportunity for an error to happen within the application. • (Better)An error might happen within the application.

  13. No.12 • (Worse)There is a necessity for the program to be implemented by a knowledgeable systems manager. • (Better)A knowledgeable systems manager must implement the program.

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