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Using Your Senses!

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  1. Using Your Senses!

  2. Writers use language to create a picture in the mind of the reader • One way a writer can do this is by writing about things using his or her senses. • When you hear these descriptions, they help to paint a picture in your mind.

  3. Quick Review • What are the five senses?

  4. Using Your Senses! • Writers write about things they might see, hear, feel, smell or taste to help make the story seem more real.

  5. If this was the setting of your story… what might you say using your senses? Image from

  6. Examples • The barn was very large. It was very old. It smelled of hay and it smelled of manure. It smelled of the perspiration of tired horses and the wonderful sweet breath of patient cow. It often had a sort of peaceful smell—as though nothing bad could happen ever again in the world. It smelled of grain and of harness dressing and of axle grease and of rubber boots and of new rope. And whenever the cat was given a fish-head to eat, the barn would smell of fish. But mostly it smelled of hay, for there was always hay in the great loft up overhead. And there was always hay being pitched down to the cows and the horses and the sheep.

  7. The barn was pleasantly warm in winter when the animals spent most of their time indoors, and it was pleasantly cool in summer when the big doors stood wide open to the breeze. The barn had stalls on the main floor for the work horses, tie-ups on the main floor for the cows, a sheepfold down below for the sheep, a pigpen down below for Wilbur, and it was full of all sorts of things that you find in barns: ladders, grindstones, pitch forks, monkey wrenches, scythes, lawn mowers, snow shovels, ax handles, milk pails, water buckets, empty grain sacks, and rusty rat traps. It was the kind of barn that swallows like to build their nests in. It was the kind of barn that children like to play in. And the whole thing was owned by Fern’s uncle, Mr. Homer L. Zuckerman. Charlotte’s Web E.B. White

  8. Examples • It was last one winter night, long past my bedtime, when Pa and I went owling. There was no wind. The trees stood still as giant statues. And the moon was so bright, the sky seemed to shine. Somewhere behind us a train whistle blew, long and low, like a sad, sad song. I could hear it through the woolen cap Pa had pulled down over my ears. A farm dog answered the train, and then a second dog joined in. They sang out, trains and dogs, for a real long time. And when their voices faded away, it was as quiet as a dream. We walked on toward the wood, Pa and I. Owl Moon Jane Yolen

  9. Let’s Try It! • Here is a passage without sensory detail. How can we improve it?

  10. Let’s Try It! • I walked through the woods and stopped on the path. I looked around me and listened. Then I continued walking.

  11. Let’s Try It! • I walked through the peaceful woods. My feet crunched on the wet leaves. I stopped on the path. I looked around me and listened. I heard birds calling and the soft hooting of an owl. I heard the cry of a wolf in the distance. I also saw the colorful leaves. It smelled like the pinecones in the forest. I felt the wind brushing against my skin. Then I continued walking. I could feel my socks getting wet from the wet ground.

  12. Today • Step 1: Choose a short section or paragraph from your story • Step 2: With a red pen, circle this section in your first draft • Step 3: Rewrite this passage, adding sensory details. Try to use at least four senses! • Use your senses to create a picture in the mind of the reader. • Be prepared to share!