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Question 3 :Argument . Mock Exam Deconstruction. Argument. What it is What it’s not. Read the prompt carefully. Prewrite. Key Words Extent Characterization Today Key Facts Author Time Period Author’s View. Scorer’s First Job. Is the essay an UPPER HALF or LOWER HALF essay? .
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Question 3 :Argument Mock Exam Deconstruction
Argument • What it is • What it’s not
Prewrite • Key Words • Extent • Characterization • Today • Key Facts • Author • Time Period • Author’s View
Scorer’s First Job Is the essay an UPPER HALF or LOWER HALF essay? Tells WHY and HOW Tells WHAT Abstract/ Universal Truth Literal/Concrete
Scoring Guide Even: Level of THINKING Odd: Level of WRITING
Most essays fell in this range Inconsistent-- Flashes of greatness 4 Inadequate
Sample Essays • In small groups, read the three essays. • Use the scoring guide and decide on a score for each of the three. • After your group has decided, write the score on the essay.
The best essay • “melting pot” defined and compared thoroughly with “tomato soup” analogy (which is also defined) • “American creed” well-articulated • Clear thesis at the end of first paragraph • Lyndon Johnson’s quota system • Cultural values of Asians and loyalties of Mexicans at odds with personal liberties • Recent budget standoff • “discord” used to directly contradict Paine’s “concord” • CONCESSION: discord can invite possibilities for change
Review YOUR Essay • Highlight your specific examples (the WHAT) • Box in your evaluative comments/connections to thesis (the HOW and WHY) • Circle strong vocabulary words • Underline concession/nod to opposition
Review YOUR Essay • Highlight your specific examples (the WHAT) • Box in your evaluative comments/connections to thesis (the HOW and WHY) • Circle strong vocabulary words • Underline concession/nod to opposition
Not just a WRITING test, but a THINKING test Know stuff!