Opinion on Seoul's Ban on Japanese Food Imports - A Student's Perspective
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In this email to the editor, Wooyoung Kim, a Junior at Seokyeong University studying International Business Languages, expresses a clear opinion on the Seoul ban on Japanese food imports. The email presents examples and support for the opinion, while ensuring sentences are interconnected. It showcases a variety of vocabulary and correct spelling, ending with a final thought. The language is formal, concise, and avoids whiny statements. Each paragraph serves a distinct purpose, maintaining proper tenses throughout. The email outlines the necessity of workplace email etiquette, group collaboration, and encourages bilingual responses for an effective discussion.
Opinion on Seoul's Ban on Japanese Food Imports - A Student's Perspective
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Week 10 workshop Complaint email Workplace email
LTTE Edit/self • Dear Editor • To the Editor, • Re “Seoul Ban on Japanese Food Imports” Oct 12. • Clear opinion in opening • Examples, support; join sentences? • Variety of vocabulary? spelling • Final thought • Kim, Wooyoung • email? • Seokyeong University Junior • Dept. of International Business Languages • by Sunday Nov 3
Grrrr email!/self/peer • Each paragraph has a purpose? • 1 • 2 • 3 • 4 • Format • Formal expressions • Concise? No whiney statements! • Tenses? • If……, I will have to
workplace email/group • groups • group leader • read each question and get all answers • you can use Korean and English • p. 48 #1 • p. 48 #2 • answers on p. 104 • p. 49 #3 make notes then write email!
HW • Check wiki!
