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This exercise focuses on correcting various grammatical and structural errors found in sentences related to fictional narratives. Students are encouraged to enhance their writing skills by proofreading sentences covering themes such as science fiction, family struggles, and historical reflections. The activity involves concrete examples and invites students to correct issues like subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and punctuation. By engaging in this practice, students will develop a better understanding of sentence structure, clarity, and the importance of revision in writing.
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Monday January 13, 2014 Week 1 Correct the following sentences on a piece of notebook paper. Begin immediately. • the pilot had no alternative, stowaways must face judgment • did the nasa pilot exaust every one of his options • barton’s ship lurched, slowed and suddenly accelerated again • in 1954, when the short story The Cold Equations were written, no people had went into outer space
Monday, January 13, 2014 Week 1 Add these to your sentences to your BR sheet. Use the same sheet of paper! • him and me enjoy science fiction because its exciting and imaginitive • andy and me taked a trip to the Mojave Dessert • next monday us students will read our drafts to one and other • Not anybody wanted to read a essay aloud
Week 1 • a strongly, detailed, precise, setting effects the reader’s emotions • Boys and Girls is a short story that is setted in tough brutally hard ranch county in canada • flora is the horses name Keisha sayed but whats the protagonists name • flora runned out the gate but that men catched her anyways
Thursday, January 10, 2013 Week 1 • alice has never wrote no novels and don’t think she never will • that is the most coldest milk of the world • alice walker who was the most young of 8 children is born in Eatonton Georgia • walker’s novel The Color Purple was winning the pulitlzer prize in fiction in 1983
Friday, January 11, 2013 Week 1 Bellringers due today! Be sure your name, date, and block are in the right hand corner. Label this “Week 1 Bellringer.” • where’s you’re sister at Larry • unfortunately i have me a sister whose alot like Dee • john steinbeck almost didn’t except the nobel prize, he was afraid that he wouldn’t wright any more • during the great depression of the 1930s many families in the midwestlosed their farms