Sad? • The little pink fishes swam upstream and died.
Elements of Voice • Diction- Detail- • Figurative Language • Imagery • Syntax Tone
Forbidden Words • GOOD NICE • PRETTY BEAUTIFUL • FINE BAD • THING IT
Forbidden words • REALLY VERY • TERRIBLE WONDERFUL • A LOT BAD
The torn coat vs the tattered coat • The US wants revenge vs • The US is thirsting for revenge
The man sighed hugely. • Why not loudly? What is the connotation of hugely? • The man coughed_____________.
Meanwhile, The United States Army, Thirsting for revenge, was prowling the country north and west of the Black Hills, killing Indians wherever they could be found.
Connotations of Thirsting? • Connotations of Prowling? • Use an eating or drinking verb to express anger about a parking ticket.