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Style Analysis: DETAILS

Style Analysis: DETAILS. Part III: DETAILS. Details are literal, concrete, or factual description (in other words, NOT figurative language); think “imagery” Who, what, when, where Remember  Diction  connotative vocabulary Details  literal description. Details are literal.

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Style Analysis: DETAILS

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  1. Style Analysis: DETAILS

  2. Part III: DETAILS • Details are literal, concrete, or factual description (in other words, NOT figurative language); think “imagery” • Who, what, when, where • Remember  • Diction  connotative vocabulary • Details  literal description

  3. Details are literal • Who? What? When? Where? Why? • Example: “turned a little to watch what I would do” This supplies CONCRETE detail to the reader; it helps us visualize the snake turning around as it sits on the desert sand

  4. Group Practice: • Read “The Rattler” (again ) • With a different color pen or highlighter from what you used for the diction analysis, highlight any examples of details or imagery that strike you as significant

  5. Detail Paragraph: Topic Sentence • The sentence should include the word detail and give a focus for the paragraph. EXAMPLE: • The author’s detail illuminates the standoff and subsequent duel between the man and snake.

  6. Detail Paragraph: Concrete Detail Sentence • Just as you did with diction, you will write an example sentence. There is one difference in the CD: you will include only TWO quotations because detail and imagery require more words than diction to convey an idea: EXAMPLE: • The snake “[turns] a little to watch” the man as it waits to see if he will go “back to the ranch house, [get] a hoe, and [return].”

  7. Detail Paragraph: Commentary Sentences • These should comment on the images conveyed by the detail. Commentary does not mean paraphrasing the quotation sentence; it means thinking about the EFFECT of the images suggested by the detail.

  8. Quotation “turned a little to watch” go “back to the ranch house, [get] a hoe, and [return]” Commentary cot afraid or hesitant casual reaction to trivial interruption calm watching of a possible threat Sample Analysis for “The Rattler”

  9. Sample Detail Paragraph The author’s detail illuminates the standoff and subsequent duel between the man and snake.The snake “[turns] a little” to watch the man as it waits to see if he will go “back in the ranch house, [get] a hoe, and [return].”The snake is not afraid, hesitant, or easily unnerved because it knows its own formidable power. It moves its head casually, glancing over to see what interesting but trivial intrusion has arrived.After the man kills the reptile, he “does not cut the rattles off” but instead lets the snake “drop into the bush.”He does not want to take its life and feels no satisfaction in its death. The man’s respectful actions in response to the dignified presence of the snake are worthy.As he performs his distasteful yet necessary task, he mourns the loss of grandeur and nobility.

  10. Paired Practice: Henry James Passage • Read the Henry James passage • Underline, circle, or highlight the details in the passage • Discuss/chart quotations and commentary • Rough draft of paragraph

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