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writing. Lecturer:. How can we write a good article?. Theme: 2. Writing skills:. an article that appeals to readers ’ emotion. Use exact adjectives, good verbs and proper phrases. Use some effective conjunctions. Use different sentence structures. Writing.

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  1. writing Lecturer:

  2. How can we write a good article? • Theme: • 2. Writing skills: an article that appeals to readers’ emotion Use exact adjectives, good verbs and proper phrases. Use some effective conjunctions. Use different sentence structures.

  3. Writing • Twice as hard or twice as easy? Common mistakes Writing Secure code tips & Strategies Exercises for Writing

  4. Common mistakes

  5. Situational writing 假设你是李平，最近参加了某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次夏令营活动，现就有关事项征求你的意见，请根据下表所提供的信息用英语以书信的形式给予答复。 活动时间 7月15—22 或8 月15—22 参加英语角 学唱英语歌曲 活动内容 听英语讲座 表演英语短剧 看英语电影 教外宾学中文 对活动内容的建议或要求 注意：1.词数：100左右 2.选出你喜欢的时间及两项活动并提一项建议

  6. A student’s composition: Dear Sir or Madame, Thank you for invite me to the English summer camp. I think you can hold it in June so that our students can have time to ready for the new term. For me, I’d like to listen the English lectures. Do that will enlarge our knowlege. I also hope I can join the English Corner so I and foriegner teacher can talk English with each other. I think I can improve speaking English by communicate with him because my English teacher is not a trueborn Englishman. And I think you can have some sports games, such as play valleyball, go swimming. I very like sports. I hope you to agree my advices . Yours truly, Li Ping (106 words) inviting July we to get ready attend Doing that knowledge join in the foreign teacher speak my spoken English communicating native organize playing volleyball, going you can adopt advice

  7. Sample: Dear Sir or Madame, I’m very glad to be invited to the English summer camp. I prefer to go in July because I’ll have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But I’d like to attend the English lectures, from whichI can get more information on British and American culture.With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture. It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp? Thank you very much. Yours truly, Li Ping

  8. Dear Sir or Madame, I’m very glad to be invited to the English summer camp. I prefer to go in July because I’ll have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture. It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp? Thank you very much. Yours truly, Li ping Sample Dear Sir or Madame, Thank you for inviting me to the English summer camp. I think you can hold it in July so that we can have time to get ready for the new term. For me, I’d like to attend the English lectures. Doing thatwill enlarge our knowledge. I also hope I can join in the English corner so I and the foreign teacher can speak English with each other I think can improve my spoken English by communicating with him because my English teacher is not a native Englishman. And I think you can organize some sports games, such as playing volleyball, going swimming. I like sports. I hope you can adopt my advice. Yours truly, Li ping

  9. Common problems: 1. The passage is wordy. I also hope I can join the English Corner so I and foreigner teacher can talk English with each other. I think I can improve speaking English by communicate with him because my English teacher is not a trueborn Englishman. ( 40 words) I’d like to attend the English Corner so I can communicate with others in English. In this way, I hope to improve my spoken English. ( 25words)

  10. Common problems: 2.Thinking in Chinese and writing in Chinglish eg: (no effective conjunctions) For me, I’d like to attend the English lectures. Doing that will enlarge our knowledge. As to me,I’d like to attend the English lectures because it can enlarge our knowledge by listening to more lectures. I like sports. I hope you can adopt my advice. I like sports very much, so I hope you can adopt my advice.

  11. (I) Improve the wordy sentences 1.I like to learn tosing English songs better. 2. We also help people from other countries to learn Chinese. 3.In the not too far future, our dreams will come true. 4.We will have the party in the garden which is on the top of the main building. 5.I also like to go to places where we can learn more about culture of old China in Beijing. (prefer) foreigners (near) (We will have the party in the garden on the top of the main building.) I also like to go to more places of interest in Beijing.

  12. Summary : Change phrases into single words Change unnecessary clauses into phrases

  13. (II)Improve the sentence in Chinglish Because we are learning of English, English knowledge is the more the better for us. The more we learn, the better we will be in learning English.

  14. ? ? ? (III)Improve the passage: Tom is four years old and he is energetic. One day a bike was given to him. The bike is new and it is light blue in color. Tom received the bike for his birthday. He struggled to ride his bike. He struggled for two hours. However, he was unsuccessful in riding the bike. Four-year-old Tom is energetic. One day, he got a light blue bike for his birthday. Though he struggled for two hours to ride it, he was unsuccessful.

  15. Tips and strategies

  16. ? ? ? Tip 1: Words: Sentences: On words and sentences Never make up new words on your own. Never translate word by word Use fewer words to express clearly Do use some conjunctions

  17. Tip 2:Remember useful expressions: useful expressions 表示顺序, 动作过程：first, firstly, first of all, second, secondly, at first, at last, next． 表示转折: but, yet, or, however, nevertheless, although, 表示结果: thus, therefore, so, as a result… 表示并列: and, also, as well as, and then 表示递进: besides, what’s more, moreover, in addition, what is worse, worse still… 表列举: for example/for instance, that is to say,… 表原因: because of, thanks to, due to, owing to,… 表示比较:on (the) one hand,…on the other hand,… 表示总结: in short, in a word, in general,

  18. Tip 3: Follow typical patterns Write a passage about my view on…… We had a heated discussion about/on ...…. Students’ views/ideas/opinions on it vary/differ from person to person. Some students say / think / believe that… However, others hold the view that…… As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the first/second view./ I would like to ….The reasons are as follows. First, …… Secondly,…… In conclusion / In a word ,……

  19. Exercises for writing

  20. Writing: 毕业前夕，你班讨论给李老师送一份礼物，大家提出两条建议： （1）送影集 ( album ), 里面有每一位同学的照片； （2）送磁带，录有每个同学对老师的祝福. 请写短文简述班级的讨论，然后表明你自己的意见，并说明理由。 注意：1. 100 字左右 2. 用第一人称写

  21. … … Gift Reasons an album in memory of the happy time remember all of the students with a tape-recording sending our wishes to …… a tape the report of enrollment (录取通知书) express thanks to show our love for the teacher other useful gifts practical … … ……

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