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UNIT SIX

Technical documents often contain redundant or needless phrases that clutter the content. Learn to delete them or express ideas more concisely to improve clarity and efficiency in communication.

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UNIT SIX

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  1. UNIT SIX Delete Redundant and Needless Phrases 除去重複及不必要的措詞

  2. Many technical documents are cluttered [亂七八糟地充塞[覆蓋](某地);使(頭腦等)混亂;使凌亂] with redundant or needless phrases that can be either deleted entirely or expressed more simply.

  3. 例句 • (Original)The engineer wants to take the opportunity to make an introduction of the novel property. • (Revised)The engineer wants to introduce the novel property.

  4. OTHER EXAMPLES OF WORDY PHRASES INCLUDE

  5. Another form of redundancy is putting two words together that have the same meaning. • Since "rule" implies something that is "general", the writer can simply say "rule" instead of "general rule".

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